In both articles "Posture Affects Standing,and Not Just the Physical Kind" by Jane E Brody and "Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture-and Your Mood"by Amy Cuddy. In these two articles, both author talk about how we are ruining our posture in life and how dangerously it affects us. Both authors make good points they show many details and example for their argument. In my opinion from these two articles i believe that Amy Cuddy gave more information and details. In the article of "Posture Affects Standing, And Not just the Physical Kind" by Jane E Brody, she speaks about how posture is ruining us emotionally and physically. When I read this article i notice that in almost every paragraph she restates her argument, I believe it 's because she wants her reader to fully understand what she 's really trying to say. In my opinion it 's a very clever way to keep the reader know what she is talking. In her articles she states "Poor posture can have ill effect that radiate throughout the body, causing back and neck pain, muscle fatigue, breathing limitations, arthritic joints, digestive problems and mood disturbance." what she means by all this is posture is affecting us in many ways we didn 't think it can. In her article she includes counter arguments for example " Although early …show more content…
In the article "Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture- and Your Mood," by Amy Cuddy, She Directly get to her argument "SmartPhones are ruining our posture. And bad Posture doesn 't just mean a stiff neck. It can hurt us in insidious psychological ways."What she means by the quote is that, posture affects us in sneaky ways that we won 't notice it until it happens. In the article Cuddy also claims her arguments multiple times.When reading the article she claims her argument in many different ways trying to make sure the reader understand. In the article Cuddy gives many example and information. But she doesn 't really add information/ details what to do to prevent slouching and ruining
Page’s patient, P, suffers from back pain and he is determined to find the cause of the pain. To rule of the most lethal causes of back pain, some of the questions Page asks include “Did the pain wake him up at night? Was it worse when he was lying down? Had he recently lost weight?” (Page).
Body Paragraph 3: Topic Sentence (1): Reb's preaching and traditional from the old country cause Sara to achieve her dreams by Sara leaving home to pursue a better life. Developing Sentences (3): Reb and Sara have different perspectives on their life should be, which demonstrates the arguments that occur. Sara states that Reb should work and give his daughters' freedom, which reveals to be one of the arguments. But Reb assumes that a women's job is to serve a man until the man dies, which shows Reb's different perspective. Introduction of Evidence (1): His criticism and his way of handling situations become too much for Sara
David Carr’s essay reflects very well on the title of his essay, “Keep Your Thumbs Still When I am talking to you”. Carr gives examples that relate to personal examples of how people today are constantly on their phones. By people always being on their phones it has become an act or rudeness towards other people from whom you were speaking to. Instead of keeping your elbows off of the table we will now be told to keep our thumbs still. In addition, similar to my experience at Professor Ataman’s lecture, David Carr discusses his experience at the South by Southwest Interactive Conference, at the conference he found that all the people had some sort of device with a screen that their eyes were attached too.
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Bending over patients to look in their mouths and perform consideration can likewise lead to back, neck and shoulder soreness or an
Carr brings up the question of how our minds can be negatively affected by this when he asks, “So what happens to our minds when we allow a single tool such dominion over our own perception and cognition?” While Carr is aware that the smartphone serves a countless number of useful purposes and tasks, he believes we should think deeper about the lesser known effects of our smartphones which people so easily allow to take over their lives. Carr begins his article with statistics, stating that the typical smartphone owner checks on their phone over 80 times a day, which translates to almost 30,000 times a year. He calls smartphones our constant companions, comparing them to teachers, secretaries, confessors, and gurus. In fact, Carr includes a 2015 Gallup survey which found that “more than half of iPhone
Is Googling Good or Bad? A Response to Stop Googling. Let’s Talk. In the article, “Stop Googling.
The author could not support his opinions due to the words he used while in his persuasive essay. Shepherd did not convince his audience due to lack of information
Most smartphones use radio frequency which is allocated in the mobile service for their reception of their signals. B) Researches has indicated the health concerns of smartphones are cancer, other health effects and car accidents. The number of smartphones are increasing leading to health issues increasing. However, there is no current evidence to non-ionising radiation increasing cancer risk but according to World Health Organizing based on mixed epidemiology between radiation frequency from wireless phones and head cancers, researches has confirmed that smartphones have the potent to cause cancer to human from the radiofrequency energy that is heating. Smartphones also can muck up your sleeping pattern, change in brain activity and reaction times.
“C: It is very common to have weak ankles and crooked knees? B: Yes, very common indeed” (Document 7). Being deformed due to work is unsafe. It is not a normal thing for people to be deformed due to work. These are just a few negatives of
The idea of asking questions along his article keeps the audience engaged into reading more. Apart from capturing the audience to keep reading he also misleads his point from the shifting of two different concepts and agreement to one. From the begging of his article he says, "Whatever happened to personal responsibility?". Referring to kids suing McDonalds for making them fat. As he reaches the end of the article he says," Fast food companies are marketing to children a product health Hazards and no warning labels.
Cell Phones and Their Negative Impact Every day 6.8 billion people use a cell phone. With almost 91% of the world population using these devices, one would assume they are safe. They are not. Some would disagree, contradicting with how cell phones can improve your everyday life with health apps, reminders, etc.
Especially when someone is trying to get school work done, if they start using their phone, then it takes them so much longer to get that work done than if they had just put the phone down and do it. Smartphones are too much of a distraction to people, and it is sometimes hard to put them down. People nowadays rely so much on their smartphones and it is not okay. For example, for directions they just use the navigation map on ones phone instead of knowing how to get there by looking at directions.
Posture causes us to feel certain types emotional ways, lower self-esteem, and depression. How else might smartphones affect us? Well slouching can affect our memory too. In a study published in Clinical Psychology and Psychotherapy of people with clinical depression. Participants were randomly chosen to sit in a slouched or an upright position and were given a list of positive and negative words.
Specific purpose: To inform my audience about the effects of smartphone. Central idea: The phenomenon of smartphone addiction cause many effects in terms of enviromental, social, physical and mental. BODY I. One of the effects that will experienced by human when overuse the smartphone is physical effect. A. Nowadays, we are relying on our smartphone instead on using our brains and this action cause reduction to our brain’s function. 1.