At our lake, we had plenty of sights to see. We went on multiple walks throughout the day. We would walk down the dirt road in every direction, taking it all in. The trees, the lake, the beautiful weather, all of it. We would take a path into the woods and find various plants and animals that were non-existent back home.
This quote brought a balance to the table that was well needed because if the essay would have been all ethos and logos it would soon become boring, but then there is the emotional side to the essay that she brings in that keeps her audience intrigued. Her choice of diction is very smart throughout the essay because it brings a nice flow between the varying sentence length that she uses and the varying diction strength that she presents. There is a balance between all of her work in the essay which makes it one of the more interesting essays that I have ever read. In conclusion Dockterman is very effective in her argument and has made very smart choices when it comes to how the essay is set up. Every aspect of the essay brings a nice balance to each other that where one fails to bring something to the table, the other is able to make up for it by bringing in that single aspect that was
Looking on the other side, Paul Fleischman gets the theme across the audience in absolutely different way. He shows the theme by showing how abstract people found a similarity through a passion. On page 50 of the book it said “Most were old. Many grew plants from their native lands- huge Chinese melons, ginger, cilantro, a green the Jamaican call calaloo, and many more. Yet we were all subject to the same weather and pests, the same neighborhood, and the same parental emotions toward our plants.”(page 50, line 8)Before going to the garden Nora and Mr. Myles did not know many people in their neighborhood, as pretty much of everyone in their neighbourhood were different.
This is a poem about a list of rules and laws that Carroll came up with that are amusing and not very difficult to follow. In this literary work Lewis uses alliteration, imagery and rhyme to give it a fun and foolish feel. This is enjoyable because of the nonsense side and how entertaining it is to read. Unlike most of Lewis’s other poems, the rhyme scheme is aabb (Carroll, Lewis Poetry for Young). After reading a critique titled “First loves from Jabberwocky to After- Apple picking” by Joyce Carol Oates, it is very clear that she enjoyed Lewis Carroll’s books and poems very much.
I loved to read this poem because it was easy to understand .It was cool when Mr. Molina a Karen read out loud this poem, maybe that is why I loved this story because I was able to imagine them as the characters from the poem. How would you revise your essays if you had more time? If I had more time to revise my essays I would look back to my arguments and check to see if the sources that I used are valid and relatable to my sentence. Sometimes I get writer’s block and so I just whatever comes to my mind, even if it does not make sense. This
I am Harry Stiles. I was a once a farmer. I’m still the same man who saw the growth of the city from a little community into a haven of light and music, people and cars, architecture and art. I remember the time as young boy, I never thought of going away from Abucay, a place where I was born. I loved how people live in there, how menfolk gather woods into big bundles to be sold in the big city, how gaily dressed women, sturdy and full of life, harvesting gabi and camote on the hillsides, putting them in big baskets which they carried on their backs as they went down the trails, and how the children use the green grass as their play area.
Gabrielle Johnson Mr. Beck English 101 07 16 March 2018 The Park Have you ever just gone somewhere to go and clear your mind and it just feels so peaceful and you just feel like your at the right space at the right time . I go to the park trail because its a place where I can escape all the constraints of the world , a place where you do not have to worry about anyone or anything , a place for you and your thoughts. The park trial is a very beautiful place to clear your mind because you see all of God’s beautiful creations. I did my observation essay here because there is so much to hear, taste ,touch, and see. You really get to see how wonderful and beautiful something can be and it makes you not want to take anything for grant.
I’m not “unwanted” by my family just by the rest of the world. So when the government comes to check that there is nobody that may be extra to feed, like an unwanted kid. I have to find a place to hide. In my neighborhood there are a lot of us by us, I mean the “unwanted”, so normally we warn each other that the government is in town and that day we go to a tree house that we built in the woods. There is about ten of us in town.
The suburb of the big city, at the edge of a small forest, besides the 200 feet square of hill, there are few houses randomly distribute on the wide open space. Ancient small wooden house should be look nice, but scrub and tall weeds now covered the surrounding, yellowed lawn which was not clean for a long time. Perhaps the owners are busy about his carrier and no time to do cleaning or maybe lazy. However, there is always an elegant white wooden house which is located around the middle of the field, 700 feet is saying “hi” to me. Although walking from white house to the green hill takes around 15 minutes and especially when cycling up the hill, there is a liquid flow out from face to the ground, it still cannot stop me to go to the beautiful and peaceful hill.