“Click clack The Rattle Bag” is a short story by Neil Gaiman. This story is about a boy and his sister’s boyfriend in the boys house. It starts with the boyfriend telling the boy to go to bed. The boy asks the boyfriend to walk him to his room and tell him a bedtime story. The kid says nothing too scary though. He asks what if you told about “Click-Clack The RattleBag” the boyfriend asked what's it about? The kid tells him it’s about a shadow monster who gets you when you least expect it and leaves you in a wind chime made from your bones. After that the boy asked the boyfriend about his day. He said that wouldn’t make much of a story. The boyfriend opens the door to the attic and he goes in. It's perfectly dark, the boyfriend says. He hears a chime the boyfriend would have ran if he knew something would grab him and take him into the darkness. The story ends there with a cliffhanger. The author develops the characters' different points of view in order to build up suspense throughout the story. …show more content…
For example in the story it says “So what do these Click-clacks look like?” Even as I asked him, I wished I could take the question back, and leave it unasked. I thought: Huge spidery creatures. Like the one in the shower that morning. I’m afraid of spiders. I was relieved when the boy said, “They look like what you aren’t expecting. What you aren’t paying attention to.” This Evidence is an example because it shows the suspense of what the creature looks like between the boy and the boyfriend. This shows how the evidence is valid because my claim is how the story builds suspense through each character's different point of
The girl explained how he was continuously walking by her house everyday with a different deer. The mom is shocked and talks about how he never has luck with hunting, so it was unusual. The girl’s mother was convinced that something wasn’t right, so she went home and explained it to her husband. Her husband followed the man’s footsteps all the way until he reached a deer lying
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They entered the cabin and Cassandra immediately detected the overpowering smell of mildew and old, stale lady finger cookies. "Time to pick our bunks now girls" all the girls around Cassandra squealed and immediately ran to a bunk with a friend and Cassandra was left alone on the extra army cot in the corner. Cassandra sat down and began to unpack her things and then she stumbled across the journal her mother gave her. She all of a sudden felt really lonely and upset. When she finished unpacking her things into the small dresser she put the book under the pillow.
Major arrives. “The night was cold and heat wet” (p19). This makes the story eerie and creates suspense. Secondly, W.W. Jacobs describing the how good it sounds in inside and how warm it is. “In the small parlor… the fire burned brightly” (p19).
His method of foreshadowing causes the reader to develop a clear idea of the upcoming events and continue reading. Krakauer’s detailed descriptions are followed by a suspenseful cliffhanger that grabs the reader’s attention. For instance, after witnessing the incompetent skills of the other climbers Hall remarks, “I think it’s pretty unlikely that we’ll get through this season without something bad happening up high” (Krakauer 130). The reader is left with a vague suspicion that something horrible will occur during the climb, and continues reading to reveal the answers. Also, Krakauer places short excerpts from various pieces of writing in the beginning of each chapter that relate to the events in the upcoming chapter.
The story instantly starts off strange with a narration from a very curious unknown visitor in Starkfield. This strange narration creates a mysterious atmosphere which stays consistent throughout the book. Wharton’s use of a curiously reserved narrator creates just enough suspense and distance to guide the reader through the perspective of an outsider. This type of first person narration allows for a more up close and personal look at Ethan’s inner thoughts, emotions and struggles. Along with that, flashbacks can also serve a very important role in the narrative structure, which contributes to the overall understanding
This was evident when Connie's parents left her in charge of Kenneth and the house while they were gone on a night out on the town. No one knew that later that night Kenneth would end up shooting Connie's boyfriend after believing that he was “a prowler” (Dubus 457). Though this story's ending was unexpected, surprising, and confusing throughout the read I also felt an underlying feeling of wordiness. Our feelings toward a piece of work can make or break our experience.
However, it is revealed in the end of the story what kind of person Noah really is compared to who Skylar thought he was. “Next thing I knew I was punched then pushed to the ground. All I could do was scream, he put his hand over my mouth and started to hit me harder”, Noah rapes Skylar after she is invited inside his home. The author’s words create a vivid image and realistic atmosphere. This plot twist stunned readers with the unexpected, some readers may have thought that this was the start of a love story, others a friendship, but it turned out to be a horror story for Skylar.
The author ends the story at this point and leaves a haunting effect on the
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And then she close her book and walks out of the house, and suddenly
He then states, “he headed for home and the day’s work, unaware that it would be his last” (13) the suspense is once again boosted. Up to this point, the reader has acquired background information on what is known as the victim. Bringing the reader back to the edge of the seat waiting for the murder to
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This piece of text is suspenseful to the reader because the reader does not know where the narrator is or what time period this event