Why would a 13 year old boy leave his brother to die in a storm? The Narrator is responsible for Doodle’s death. I say this because he left Doodle to die in the storm, he was cruel to Doodle, and he made Doodle always feel discouraged.
He let Doodle to die in the storm. “The knowledge that Doodle 's and my plans had come to naught was bitter, and that streak of cruelty within me awakened. I ran as fast as I could, leaving him far behind with a wall of rain dividing us. The drops stung my face like nettles, and the wind flared the wet glistening leaves of the bordering trees. Soon I could hear his voice no more.” (Hurst 11) This explains that The Narrator had left Doodle by himself, to die in the storm. When the deafening peal of thunder had
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The Narrator was cruel to Doodle. ““I won’t touch it,” he said sullenly. “Then I’ll leave you here by yourself,” I threatened, and made as if I were going down.” (Hurst P4) The evidence here shows without a doubt that The Narrator was cruel to Doodle, causing Doodle to think that there was no point in running after The Narrator through the storm as he would still be treated cruelly if he made it back to the house. “It was bad enough having an invalid brother, but having one who possibly was not all there was unbearable, so I began to make plans to kill him by smothering him with a pillow.” (Hurst P2) This evidence, taken directly from the defendants diary, tells us that he had made plans to kill Doodle before Doodle even reached the age of 3.¨He was a burden in many ways. The doctor had said that he mustn 't get too excited, too hot, too cold, or too tired and that he must always be treated gently. A long list of don 'ts went with him, all of which I ignored once we got out of the house.¨ (Hurst P3) My statement that The Narrator is involved directly in Doodleś death is supported here by saying that The Narrator ignored everything that the doctor had told him not to do with …show more content…
The Narrator made Doodle feel discouraged. “To discourage his coming with me, I 'd run with him across the ends of the cotton rows and careen him around corners on two wheels. Sometimes I accidentally turned him over, but he never told Mama.“ (Hurst P3) The Narrator would discourage Doodle by being cruel to him, he had never wanted to take Doodle with him everywhere that he went, so he tried to stop Doodle by hurting him when he had come outside with him. “One day I took him up to the barn loft and showed him his casket, telling him how we all had believed he would die.” (Hurst P4) Doodle may have stopped running in the rain after The Narrator because he may have felt that there was no point in living anymore. The Narrator had made Doodle feel so discouraged that Doodle eventually decided to let the rain and the storm kill him. "Don 't hurt me, Brother," he warned. "Shut up. I 'm not going to hurt you. I 'm going to teach you to walk." I heaved him up again, and again he collapsed.” The one brotherly deed that The Narrator does is try to teach Doodle to walk and do what the other kids can, but even in his kindness he still
When Doodle died Brother Armstrong was not near him nor did he cause or plan for it to happen and he even went after Doodle when he called but it was to late. Before brother Armstrong got their it was Doodle and ropes hanging from the sky that took away their happiness. It was how death was described in this situation from the storm.
The brother is to blame for doodles death. Doodle was a disabled young child with a selfish brother that only looks out for himself. His brother was ashamed to be with or around him. One of the biggest reasons wanted him dead is because he was embarrassed to be around him. The three reasons I believe that the brother wanted to kill doodle was he was embarrassed, he pushed him to hard, and he was selfish.
It's the narrators fault for the following reasons: he was selfish, he was embarrassed of him, and he pressured him. The narrator was being selfish as he admitted that he did it for himself because he was ashamed of Doodle being crippled. Doodle looks up to his brother and would do anything for his approval. The narrator knows that his brother's heart is weak, forces Doodle
My evidence to support this statement is on page 7 he was far behind the narrator's expectations it says doodle was way behind schedule so we decided to double our efforts then later it said: “I made him swim until he was blue”. It clearly shows the effect of training doodle to far which led to doodles downfall later. Which also later the ibis dies and doodle only notices which is an example of foreshadowing which represents that doodle is the ibis that died by the storm. Their grandma points out the red ibis is bad luck another example of foreshadowing.
‘The rain came, roaring through the pines. And then, like a bursting Roman candle, a gum tree ahead of us was shattered by a bolt of lightning. When the deafening thunder had died, I heard Doodle cry out, "Brother, Brother, don 't leave me! Don 't leave me!’ (425)
Here is my evidence. First reason the narrator is guilty of Doodle’s death is because he was ashamed of him. This is clearly shown when brother makes the statement on page 347 “I was ashamed of having a crippled brother.” This clearly shows the narrator's shame in Doodle. Another statement
As they are running home, Doodle separates from his older brother because he is unable keep up anymore. His older brother doesn't stop until he realises that Doodle isn't behind him, but it is already too late. Hurst states, “‘Doodle!’ I screamed above the pounding storm and threw my body to the earth above his. For a longtime, it seemed forever, I lay there crying, sheltering my fallen Scarlet Ibis from the heresy of rain” (391-393 Hurst).
I ran as fast as I could, leaving him far behind with a wall of rain dividing us” (360). The narrator abandoned his brother during a vicious thunderstorm only because he wanted to retaliate against Doodle for not completing the program. Even the narrator himself said in the quote that a “streak of cruelty within me awakened” (Hurst, 360). The narrator knew that he was being cruel and proceeded with his actions, only out of spite and shame for his
On page “347” Doodles brother was ashamed of having a crippled brother. His brother also left him in the rain when doodle had tripped and fell. His druther didn 't turn around and help doodle. These are a couple of reasons why i think doodle died because of his brother. I also believe that doodle 's brother killed him because, on page “345” his brother had plans to smother doodle in his sleep.
The narrator loved Doodle. In the beginning of the story, Doodle had little chance to survive, and ”Everybody thought he would die-everybody except aunt Nicey, who delivered him.” The narrator, Doodle’s own brother, did not believe he would live, until Doodle was three years old lying on the bed. The narrator peeked through the iron bars of the bed, and Doodle looked right at him and smiled. The narrator skipped through the halls yelling, “he's all
Doodle ended up learning to walk and talk, which shows that he develops throughout the story. As you know, the name of the poem is "The Scarlet Ibis," which you can connect to the rage and redness of Doodle's brother wanting to kill him. Doodle is very weak he seemed all head with a tiny body that was red and shriveled like an old man. Everybody thought he was going to die—everybody except Aunt Nicey, who had delivered him.
When the storm hits, the two brothers run back to the house but Doodle can not keep up and brother taken over by pride leaves him there alone. That powerful pride that brother has, always breaks his bond with Doodle, after the failed lesson they just had, he gives up on his brother. The narrator, clearly has a lot of things going on inside his head, lost he just leaves him there because of his failure and an inside pride. “I began to weep and the tear-blurred vision in red before me looked very familiar. Doodle I screamed above the pounding storm and threw my body to the earth above his.
Due to his hurtful actions, inflicted upon Doodle throughout his life, the Narrator feels deep shame for what he has caused. Through the elements of foreshadowing and dialogue, Hurst’s narration reveals the protagonist’s guilt, emphasizing his deep regret over his actions regarding his crippled brother. The Narrator foreshadows the eventual climax of the story through his words regarding his views of pride. He states, “But all of us must have something to be proud of, and Doodle had become mine.
"Doodle!" I screamed above the pounding storm and threw my body to the earth above his. For a long time, it seemed forever, I lay there crying, sheltering my fallen scarlet ibis from the heresy of rain”(Hurst 6).This section shows from the end of Doodle’s life onward Brother has felt guilty. The whole story is Brothers story of the dangers of pride and his personal experience.
Given all the evidence in the story there’s no doubt about it that Doodle’s death was because of his brother’s dislike for him, self-pride, and decisions when Doodle needed his brother most. The Narrator is responsible for his brother, Doodle's, death because he never really liked him to begin with. William Armstrong (Doodle) was born a disabled child when the narrator was 6 years old. The narrator was wishing for a brother that he would be able to do things with and have fun with, but when the narrator was