Dance Journey Rhetorical Analysis

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Hi Johal, Your oral presentation about your dance journey was an inspiring story, which opens up many opportunities in your life. It is amazing to know that how it shakes your personality and helped you to overcome criticism. Throughout out the presentation, you did really well in presenting your ideas in a very comfortable manner and maintained good eye contact with the audience. As well as, you answered to the audience questions in detailed at the end of your presentation. You presented with confident. You could improve your PowerPoint slides by using light backgrounds to highlight dark pictures rather than using dark purple background. Also, your speech would have been more effective if you could use large images on each slide.

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