Descriptive Writing: My Beautiful Dog By Hye Jin Park

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Task1 Read a straightforward descriptive text

1. My beautiful dog

2. The dog is like her baby, she loves him so much and treat him like her own kid. The dog has black and white color. His eyes are blue. He is so cute when he was a puppy.

3. The main topic is how she loves her dog and her dog make her happy.

4. The girl describe how her dog look like and how close between herself and the dog.

5. 12 years old girl from China.

6. b. A descriptive text.

7. his name is LOBO

8. like, lovely, sweet, black,white,blue.

9. like a little baby , like a little kitten, black and white like a cartoon cow like two pieces of sky like clean glasses like a real wolf.

10.

My Friend Hye Jin.

12. Introduce friend, her name is Hye Jin Park. She is from Korean. She was born on April 25th.

13. The second paragraph is talking about Hye’s family, her mom runs a Korean Restaurant, name is Jeaoodo.

14. Hye Jin likes purple and green. She also likes painting. She going to study at BYU. She doesn’t like dog, except her friend pet HoDong Yee. She would love to visit Japan and Australia.

15. The main topic is introducing my friend who is from Korean and her family have a restaurant business. Describe about Hye personality what does she like and what she going to do.

16. The girl from Korean, she is 10 years old.

17. b A descriptive text.

18. Hye

I went to Colorado and Denver for Ski with my friends. We rent a car to drive there all the way from Omaha Nebraska to Denver it take around 8 hours to drive but, on that day when we leave it wasn’t a good day for me, when I leave the city it was a snow storm hit the town. I couldn’t see prefer when am drive. My friend and I we help each other to drive the car. Until we about half way but snow still keep falling down that kind like hard to drive and have to be careful. Suddenly my car hit and run to the rock on the road at that time my friend who drive the car was slam the break so hard and the road was so slippery. We couldn’t control our car and our car almost got to hit the big truck in the front the car was spin on the road because we hit the break so hard and then the car was go down in to the side way. All of us were scream so loud and we thought that we are going to die for sure. We don’t know what to do at that time but we are still lucky that the car be hide us was stopped and come to checked on us. The nice guy help us to call the police, then not even 10 minutes the police’s car came to help us and pulled the car back to the road. The guys and polices were so nice that they even help us to checked car’s engine if it okay to continue to drive. Then we keep driving to Denver which it take us for 13 hours to get there ,and finally we get there safely and had a great time for our