Dialectical Journal For Kennedy's Wife

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This is a really intriguing story. I enjoyed Dixon’s conflict even though at points I thought he was kind of a douche because of the thoughts he had with his wife or son. Still, I understood him at the same time.
There are a lot of men in this story so the use of he and him gets confusing without saying who the narrator is talking about. On page 2, it says “The baby looks like him” who Dixon or Logan? I also didn’t know who Mary was, is Mary the wife ? Introduce that before or while explaining that she is the wife. At first, I thought the wife was not important in Dixon’s life that’s why we didn’t get her name. Also, I didn’t know that Jacqueline was the name of JFK’s wife, so I had to look that up. There isn’t a need to put Mrs. Kennedy or
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