Disadvantages Of Using Mobile Phone In School

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1. Introduction
A. Hook/Attention getter: In this era of 21st century, technology play the main role in our life, we can experience that in the situation where mobile phone becomes indispensable gadget, an absolute necessity for both adult and children. Aware of the essential of mobile phone in life, people starts question whether it should be allowed in school or not.

B. General Statement: mobile phone is such a wonderful tool for communication, moreover education. By looking at its benefit, do we allow students to use cell phone in school and is that will give good impact on students studies?

C. Thesis Statement: Allowing school children using mobile phone in schools brings its own advantages and disadvantages.

2. Body
A. Topic sentence
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Topic sentence 2 : School children should not be allowed to bring mobile phone to schools because there have some disadvantages in that.

1. Supporting point 1 : The one of the disadvantage students cannot bring mobile phone to schools is they use their mobile phone for cyber bullying.
a) Sub-supporting point 1 : Students can take a video or a picture of their teachers or classmates that can be dehumanizing .
i. Sub-sub supporting 1: Those pictures and videos can end up on the internet .

b) Sub- supporting point 2 : With cameras built into most mobile phone , camera phones are used to harras students
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2. Supporting point 2 : Second disadvantages of allowing school children bringing mobile phones to school is mobile phones can be a distraction in classroom.

a) Sub-supporting point 1 : Cell phones, and especially Smartphones, can present considerable distraction to their owners.
I. Sub-sub supporting 1 : Distractions come in the form of text messages, phone calls, unrestricted Internet access and any number of entertaining applications.

b) Sub supporting 2 : Not only can cell phones cause distractions for individual students in class, but they can also interrupt the entire class.
I. Sub-sub supporting 1 : A ringing, beeping, or buzzing cell phone can disrupt a test, lecture or study period and you can’t count on every student to make sure the cell phone is on silent at all times, and there will definitely be interruptions throughout the day.
3. Conclusion: In the nutshell, allowing student using mobile phone in school would be good if they used it wisely and bringing the greatest harm if the used it in the wrong way. Effects will be paid on how they used it. So, students should be matured and thinking wisely on how they will used it so that bringing mobile phone to school will not effecting their student’s life
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