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Discrepancy In My Freshman Year

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I write this addendum to elaborate on the discrepancy on my transcript and to present my claim that my grades from freshman year do not accurately depict me as the student I am. There were circumstances, both in and out of my control, that negatively impacted me during my freshman year which prevented me from achieving my absolute potential.
I’ll begin with the most excruciating circumstance. I went to Purdue University as an out-of-state student with minimal financial aid and scholarship money. Attending college nowadays is expensive, notably as an out-of-state student. My parents elected to pay the cost of my undergraduate education, to this day I am still grateful. Having moved to Texas at the start of my freshman year, my parents realized

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