I really didn't find much wrong with this piece. I would have just wrote a comment, but I did find a few pointers that could help, a little. Also, you were asking for eyes, and I can do that.
Since your not in a spotlight I'm not hurting that so, here goes.
It was one of those rare, perfect summer afternoons where the sun shines down from a cloudless sky. The two women sat across from each other in front of the window, open to allow the gentle breeze in the room. The younger of the two was a girl in her early twenties with fair hair and a slightly receding chin. She sat on the edge of the armchair grasping a pair of lavender gloves, an anxious expression in her pale eyes. The other woman was several decades older as attested to by the
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Mrs. Fairweather noticed with amusement the Worcester tea set, a gift from her late mother-in-law that usually only left the cupboard on formal occasions. Clearly Cecilia had Barnes’s approval, a sentiment he didn’t bestow lightly.
She poured the tea and as soon as Barnes left Cecilia resumed her tale. “ I don’t think you ever met Jane, Aunt Emily. She’s the daughter of my mother’s cousin Katherine Landon, and we actually never had much contact up to this last year, but mother and Cousin Katherine are quite close and write to each other frequently.” She leaned over to add a lump of sugar to her tea and Mrs. Fairweather shuddered discreetly. shuddered over sugar?
“Jane’s father died about a year ago, quite unexpectedly, and it came to light, after his death, that he had made some very bad investments. I don’t know details, but the result was that he lost a lot of money. Mother thinks it was the money problems that brought the heart attack about.” Cecilia waved this consideration aside. “But this doesn’t have anything to do with the other problem, although it’s what started it all. You see, they had to sell Barrow Hall, poor things. Not that they lost everything - there was enough left to buy a smaller place and live on a comfortable income, according to Cousin Katherine. But you can imagine the shock this was for them, and mother gathered from Cousin Katherine’s letters that Jane took it particularly hard. So when Cousin Katherine decided to go and visit some family up north, she invited Jane to spend the summer with
Her grandmother was a wealthy 70 year old. She took the responsibility to take care of Dorothea and her two brothers. Dorothea, 12 was not used to the wealthy life. She was raised to give to those in need and not to take more than she's was supposed to. Her grandmother wanted Dorothea to act as if she had always been wealthy, but Dorothea did not want that.
Mrs. Reed likewise separates Jane from the Reeds’ social circle by confining her to the nursery while her cousins spend their days in the drawing room (22) and calling Mr. Lloyd, the apothecary for “ailing servants,” instead of the family physician for Jane’s illness (15), thus placing her among the servants. However, the servants too reject Jane from their group—Miss Abbot told Jane that she is “less than a servant” because she does “nothing for [her] keep” (9). Jane thus
Q1 Timed Writing 1 Former British prime minister, Margaret Thatcher, in her 2004 eulogy to Ronald Reagan encourages American optimism. Thatcher’s purpose is to inspire American citizens to be optimistic in the face of economic decline and foreign conflict. She assumes a nostalgic and light-hearted tone in order to encourage American citizens to adopt the traits that made Ronald Reagan a successful American. Thatcher writes his eulogy because of their relationship which she describes throughout her speech, “...I have lost a dear friend,” (Thatcher).
‘Mildred, how would it be if, well, maybe I quit my job awhile?’ ‘You want to give up everything? After all these years of working, because, one night, some woman and her books--’ ‘You should have seen her, Millie’ ‘She’s nothing to me; she shouldn’t have had books. It was her responsibility, she should’ve thought of that. I hate her.
When she was only nineteen, her kindness was already apparent as she cared for her one-year-old brother, as he was “assigned to her special care, ‘given’ to her then as ‘my child’” (Marshall, 2013, pg. 55). Fuller, because her mother had too many other children to care for, acted as Edward’s mother up until he “died in her arms” due to an “unknown illness” (Marshall, 2013, pg. 55). Despite the tragic death of her brother, Margaret Fuller continued to care for her family as she “renewed her vow to follow the -- her commitment to the duty, the care of her mother and siblings” (Marshall, 2013, pg. 95). Despite living in what should have been “carefree New York days”, Fuller continued to look out for her family, Lloyd, her mentally disabled younger brother, in particular.
Regardless of the truth or legitimacy of the argument, the societal expectations played into Janie’s considerations regarding Tea Cake. Though she wanted to inquire about him, she was concerned her questions may be misinterpreted as interest which, as people later assured her, “he looked too young for her. Must be around twenty-five and here she was around forty” (Hurston 100). This age gap drove much of the gossip and some legitimate fears in the town, as well, that the reputable Mrs. Starks would end up deceived and penniless by a no-good, common man.
Sally and her family went through many trials and tribulations
Ms. NS expressed that she was often frustrated with her siblings that her family had been always the one to cook, clean for her and took her to the doctor’s office. Ms. NS reported that her grandfather left her grandmother when Ms. NS was still little. She stated that, because her grandfather had never been involved with her mother’s life, she neither knew who he was nor where he had been for all these years. Ms. NS recalled that she unknowingly ran into her grandfather at her uncle’s wife’s funeral one day, as she randomly greeted visitors. Ms. NS described that her mother came behind her and spoke in a low voice that this old gentleman was her
After Elizabeth purchased the flour, she embarked home, but suddenly she heard people shouting. Hoping to be what her timorous, stringent father had warned her from, Elizabeth quickened her pace and turned left on Hutchinson’s Street. She tried not to fall on the wet cobbled streets, but her shoes slid. What her parents whispered in hushed voices when they thought Elizabeth
Aside from the continuous financial issues, Susanna had hoped once they moved to Epworth, into a much larger rectory, (as well as Samuel's 200-pound salary increase), that things would improve. Unfortunately, Samuel had to meet his own travel expenses, ministering away from home and when he decided to try his hand at farming, due to his inexperience, that too went belly up and added more debt to their already tenuous situation. Ultimately, between two fires, Samuel disappearing for months at a time seemingly to punish her “speaking her mind”, he being put in debtor’s prison, and the loss of their 9 children, I believe had she not clung tightly to her faith, I have no doubt she would have perished
Though Edgar was not my own son by blood, he was truly a son to myself. He was my son in law, married to my last daughter Virginia. The two of us were very close and we had shared great times together Eddie and I. Since Edgar came to live with Virginia and myself in 1831, 5 years before their marriage, I initially came to see the man that Edgar was. A very truly talented man with a mind of a genius and an attitude of passion, of which he was. Regrettably however, he was a man who, as in his own words, believed he was ‘tainted by misfortunes’.
“When the bell sounded, Grandfather opened the door. ‘How do you do’ he said, beaming with pleasure, for he thought the young lady before him exceptionally pretty. She had dark hair and large lively eyes. In her hand she held a plate covered with wax paper. ‘I understand you’re the mayor’s wife.’
-“Miss Emily Grierson died, the whole town went to her funeral,” (Faulkner I). -“. . .But garages and cotton gins had encroached and obliterated even the august names of that neighborhood; only Miss Emily 's house was left,” (Faulkner I).
“The Jilting of Granny Weatherall Analysis” In the short story, “The Jilting of Granny Weatherall, Katherine Anne Porter uses rhetoric and diction to guide her audience into discovering Granny’s conscious state of mind, accounting for the various situations that over time made her bitter. Granny Weatherall fears her upcoming death, so she attempts to gain authority over her situation by controlling her doctor and her daughter, Cornelia, her primary caretaker. Granny imagines Cornelia as a little girl, as she is in more control of her life contrary to the situation she is in currently. Granny persistently pursues to belittle her illness to prove that she still has youth.
The story opens with Mrs. Wright imprisoned for strangling her husband. A group, the mostly composed of men, travel to the Wright house in the hopes that they find incriminating evidence against Mrs. Wright. Instead, the two women of the group discover evidence of Mr. Wright’s abuse of his wife. Through the women’s unique perspective, the reader glimpses the reality of the situation and realizes that, though it seemed unreasonable at the time, Mrs. Wright had carefully calculated her actions. When asked about the Wrights, one of the women, Mrs. Hale, replies “I don’t think a place would be a cheerful for John Wright’s being in it” (“A Jury of Her Peers” 7).