Evangelina Alternate Ending

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Together for three years plus. Jay and Evangelina loved each other endlessly. Doing all the things they liked to do together. Making fun of each other. Going everywhere together. Like they never leave each other's side. Jay had a very flirtatious personality. Evangelina was endured by that feature but yet hates it because he was way too over friendly. She expressed all her thoughts to him on how she had felt. He would try changing his personality. Progressively getting there. They had some bumpy paths in their relationship. Nothing too drastic that time couldn’t fix As weeks had went on Evangelina has noticed that Jay has been coming home remarkably late. Leaving the house super early. Barely home. She didn’t really suspect much from Jay …show more content…

Sara and Patricia both asked “What’s wrong Evangelina?” both very concerned for her well being. They both have known Evangelina since they were kids. So they know when something is wrong. Evangelina sort of felt betrayed. She said “I think Jay is cheating on me,” (murmurs with small cries) Her sister and friend got furious and started comforting her. Patricia whispers “I got a plan if you want to seek revenge.” Evangelina was intrigued by what Patricia said. Sara agreed and said “We must plan something devious, something Jay won’t …show more content…

When Jay came along, Sara and three other of Evangelina’s friends were there. Waiting… Anticipating… All ready for the biggest laugh. Evangelina had the cakes in boxes there. She had kissed him as if he had done nothing and they had made up, and then told him I had something special for him. Placing the boxes in front of him, he opens the boxes to see, “YOU’RE DUMPED!” big bright and clear in icing straight in his face. The look on his face was honestly priceless. Next thing Evangelina took one of the cakes and smashed it right in his face, and smothered it into his hair. He was in vain about his hair spends a lot getting it done. In front of her friends! Jay was so stunned/ astonished, didn't know what to do, and looked such a mess and funny - we just walked off and left him like that. It honestly felt so good – the best way possible way to dump him – Jay finally got what he deserves. Evangelina in her head “I’m quite sure I won't be bothered by him,” with Jay saying “Ohh I can't live without

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