I. Introduction
A. Hook/Attention getter: Haze is defined as the presence of any foreign substances in the air other than the pure air and it usually formed from the open burning and illegal logging.
B. General statement:According to environmentalists, of the University of Hawaii Professor Bach (1972 ) air pollution in the West began in the late 1940s caused the rapid development of the industrial sector and transport . Air pollution is associated with at the time of emission , industrial , power stations and other pollutants which have produced content Hydrocarbon air like ( HC ) , Carbon Monoxide ( CO ) , Nitrogen Oxides (NO , ) , Sulfur Oxide ( SO3 and Suspended particle size less than 10 microns ( PM10 ) .
C. Thesis statement: Haze can
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Introduction
A. Hook/Attention getter (2 marks)::
A&W, Starbuck, JCO Donuts, KFC and Vivo is one of the list of Fast Food Company that operation in Malaysia
B. General statement (2marks):
In this era globalisation, people are quite busy doing work or activities. These situations make people no time to cook. That is why they choose more to eat fast foods then cook themselves.
C. Thesis statement (2marks):
As the fast food contains a lot of unhealthy fat, Monosodium glutamate (MSG) and salt, it necessary to us knows about the negative site of the fast food. Eating fast food, therefore, should not suitable nowadays because it can cause obesity among the children and Teenager, also wasting our money and lack interaction between families.
II. Body
A. Topic sentence (2marks):
The one effect of consuming fast food is obesity. Fast food contains higher amount of MSG, Unhealthy fat and salt.
1. Supporting point 1 (2marks):
Fast Food can make our body getting fat and obesity. The Dangerous of fast food is the content of sodium is high. It will make children and Teenager become obesity. Obesity people have higher risk for getting diseases such as diabetes and heart
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B. Topic sentence (2marks):
The next effect of fast food is makes people like to waste their money.
1. Supporting point 1 (2marks):
Most of Fast Food in Malaysia is expensive because the restaurants of fast food charge customer with Goods and Service Charge (GST). So, most people will spent a lot of many to get their Fast Food.
2. Supporting point 2 (2marks):
Certain People think that on the spot it seems to be cheap to eat out, but if we have that mind-set more than three times a week, cheap turns into more expensive and this is proved by the profit made by this fast food restaurant
a. Sub-supporting point 2 (2marks):
The annual revenues of America’s state that the fast food industry has raised by about 20 per cent since 2001
C. Topic sentence (2marks):
Next affect is lack interaction between families is the effect of fast food.
1. Supporting point 1 (2marks):
The lover of fast food usually like goes to the fast food restaurant because most of Restaurant nowadays has facilities to satisfy their customer. Wi-Fi connection is the one of example that restaurant provide to their customers.
a. Sub-supporting point 1
In the article, “Don’t Blame the Eater,” David Zinczenko argues it is the fast food industry’s fault for the nation 's growing obesity epidemic. Furthermore, he believes people should not be blamed for their own obesity. Zinczenko argues fast-food is much more available to the fast paced lifestyle people live in rather than consuming healthy alternatives. He also discusses the fact so many people are on a low budget, it is then best and more inexpensive for them to consume fast-food. Zinczenko states a claim that the fast-food industry “would do well to protect themselves, and their customers, by providing the nutrition information people need” (Zinczenko 464).
Therefore, the intended audience can Envision him being a sluggish fat adolescent as an after effect of consuming fast food. He additionally applies tone to the text to further contend his argued point. He uses his frank tone to present his targeted group of readers about the expanding rate of obesity among the youth. He also specifies that if young people were to drive around their facility, it would be complicated for them to buy a grapefruit if they wanted one. Obesity in children brought on by fast food eateries as indicated in the article is put into viewpoint by enacting individual point of view.
In Margaret Visser’s essay, “The Rituals of Fast Food”, she explains the reason why customers enjoy going to fast food restaurants and how it adapt to customer’s needs. Some examples of the most loyal fast-food customers are people seeking convenience, travelers, and people who are drug addicts. First, most loyal customers are people seeking convenience. The reason why fast food restaurants are convenient because longer hours of being open, the prices are good , etc. As Visser said in her essay, “Convenient, innocent simplicity is what the technology, the ruthless politics, and the elaborate organization serve to the customer” (131).
Argument Response to James Suroviecki’s “The Pay is Too Damn Low” In the New Yorker magazine on August 12, 2013, James Surovwiecki’s article “The Pay is Too Damn Low” was published. He lays out a good argument on the benefits of raising the minimum wage, but fails to address the complicated connection between low-cost goods and services that Americans have come to demand and the low minimum wage. If companies such as Wal-Mart, and McDonalds were to have to pay $15 an hour for their lowest paid employee’s, it stands to reason the added costs would be passed on to consumers. Would Americans revolt at the idea of paying nearly double for a “happy meal”, or a coffee maker?
The author gives several “short-term and long-term consequences” that can happen from eating a lot of fast food which are gaining more weight than those who don’t eat out as often, not meeting nutrient needs, and consuming more calories than
I. Introduction A. Hook/Attention getter: “Fast food” is named as fast food because of the whole process from ordering, preparing and serving the food just take several minutes. B. General statement: Fast food is becoming more and more popular among people around the world because of the changing of lifestyle from the past times to the present times. C. Thesis statement: Due to the convenient, affordable price and good taste of fast food, consumption of fast food is rising according to studies but it also brings negative effects on our health in the long run. II. Body A. Topic sentence: Fast food restaurant such as McDonalds (McD) or Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC) are available almost anywhere in the world, and you can even get it with a simple phone call and get it delivered right in front of your door step or by ordering through their websites without leaving your work desk.
It can cause certain cancers, heart problems and diabetes (World Health Organization, n.d.). The thing to know is that obesity is ranked second only to smoking as a preventable cause of death (Flegal, Williamson, Pamuk, &
The factors such as consuming healthy and obesity have also been a prospect for food chains like Arby’s, which is offering the fresh and customized flavours in sandwiches away from the classic junk foods like burgers/fries and others. Fast food trends change built on what customers want. As said above, through this analysis, healthiness is the emphasis in many countries. This is not only suggested by governmental authorities, but also consumers. Nowadays, there is a growth in in organic and foods as regimes and lifestyle variations come into play.
I.Introduction A.Hook/Attention getter: “Fast food” is named as fast food because of the whole process from ordering, preparing and serving the food just take several minutes. B.General statement: Fast food is becoming more and more popular among people around the world because of the changing of lifestyle from the past times to the present times. C.Thesis statement: Due to the convenient, affordable price and good taste of fast food, consumption of fast food is rising but it brings negative effects on our health in the long run. II.Body A.Topic sentence: Fast food restaurant such as McDonalds (McD) or Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC) are available almost anywhere in the world, and you can even get it with a simple phone call and get it delivered
The effects of obesity on our society Obesity is a terrible thing to have in life. People often assume overweight is the same thing as obesity but that in entirely wrong. “The United States is already one of the most obese countries on this earth and is quickly rising ever so higher on the list” (American 1). Obesity negatively affects society by insurance cost, health, Quality of life. Obesity affects your everyday life in many ways even with the simple things like tying your shoes and standing up by yourself.
“Fast food restaurants have us hooked on to their tasty food. You See a lot of people buying fast food because how good it tastes. Well let me tell you it is not good for your health. Why do fast food places lower their prices because they know people will buy it if it doesn’t cost that much and most people buy it cause that`s how much they can afford”. Fast food places is a way to not cook every week I feel bad for people when I go to McDonald’s and ask them, do you know what you’re eating in they say
McDonald, Burger King and Subway are the most popular fast food company. C. Thesis statement: Popularity of the fast food are getting an increase due to easy and quick service, inexpensive meanwhile there are also consist of negative effects if the fast food is becoming more common in society. Body A. Topic sentence: The reasons for fast foods becomes more popular is due to easy and quick services 1. Supporting point: Firstly, the customers able to get their food as soon as they order. a. Sub-supporting point: Today, people are very busy with their working lifestyle as they tend to find fast foods as a good choice because they don 't have enough time to find a healthy food.
Fast food companies have demolished competition throughout the last 30 years in the restaurant industry. The practices used to eliminate competition such as using unhealthy food to make a profit have been reported unethical by Americans, but it tends to be desired by the American society. According to the American Franchise Corporation, certified by TrustArc, fast food companies generate $570 billion annually in the United States ("Fast Food Industry Analysis"). These statistics continue to rise as more and more fast food companies become ubiquitous. As a result, fast food companies get richer, while people contract life-altering health effects.
In the conclusion, blaming others has been always the easier and the best solution to get out of the problem. The lack of physical activities played a big role in children’s obesity, moreover the unhealthy food choices by the parents may led to increase the chances to get over-obese. Limitation is the key of success in fast food case, it is very important for parents to limit the fast food consumption and to control and monitor what their children eat daily. To avoid the lack of physical activity, parents must manage to take their children at least once a week to a park or a swimming pool without rewarding them with sweets or fast food meal. Furthermore, parents must limit their children access to televisions and social media, so they cannot be fooled by the
In the middle east and Malaysia, there are huge marketing promotions of food high in fat and many parents are having a tough responsibility in which they are confined between picking a good selection of food products to maintain their health and the health of their children or to succumb to their desires and their children’s requests to buy unhealthy advertised food products. Therefore, fast food advertising has a profound negative influence on children’s food choices and parents buying behavior in the middle east and Malaysia as it attracts them through several mediums and themes, resulting in unhealthy eating habits and an increase in the consumption of unhealthy food that causes negative health effects as obesity and weight gain, along with a tendency in the middle eastern society and the Malaysian to eat western style fast foods, which in return creates a growing demand for western fast food outlets that rises from the western culture influence on