Feelings Against Raheem

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In the story “Who Am I With Out Him?” by Sharon Flake, the narrator gave me a specific feeling that made me think that she was a real person. The way the narrator expressed her feelings made me feel she was telling them to me, she made me feel like I was on the same bus with her, when she chased a group of good girls till she got in a fight with Raheem. When the narrator got in the bus and saw that Raheem was kissing one of the good girls she started yelling “STOP THE BUS,STOP IT!” After all of that she still decides to stay with Raheem and pretend like she never saw anything. Meanwhile, she expressed her feelings against Raheem and one of the good girls she made me think she was real. By the way she gave her anger all out on Raheem “I WANT
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