The night was cold and desolate like an arctic tundra stretching out for miles with nothing to see on the horizon. That is figurative language, how you can make a piece of text better while still displaying the same scene as, the night was cold and empty. Figurative language can include similes, metaphors, hyperboles, personification, and many more. Figurative language enhances writing by making it more interesting, helps you visualize a scene taking place, and helps you understand what a character is feeling. Figurative language can make writing more interesting as it keeps the reader engaged with the words you add to it. Adding descriptive words to each sentence can make the writing less of a bore to read. In the book Echo by Pam Muñoz Ryan, one way figurative language makes a sentence more interesting is, “…filled the room with a rising march” (Ryan p.g. 356) The author could have just said, the music filled the room but by adding descriptive words it can make reading that sentence more interesting than just the base sentence. …show more content…
Many books do this so you feel as if you are in that scene to get you to continue reading. One great example of this is in the book Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone by JK Rowling, there is one point where you can clearly visualize the scene from the text, “The narrow path had opened suddenly onto the edge of a great black lake. Perched atop a high mountain on the other side, its windows sparkling in the starry sky, was a vast castle with many turrets and towers.” (Rowling p.g. 83-4) This paints a clear image in the heads of anyone who reads it which can help make you think you are actually
In stories, authors tend to use techniques that they enjoy within their writing. Some authors make a lot of analogies while others might focus on dialogue between the characters. Both of the author’s; Scott Westerfeld and Shirley Jackson, show many instances of descriptive sentences that do different things for the reader. In both Uglies by Scott Westerfeld, and The Lottery by Shirley Jackson, the author’s use description to illustrate the setting, give hints about the plot, and set the mood.
Throughout this excerpt, the use of imagery is vital to the evolution of Chief Bromden. Chief wakes up with the sudden urge to do something. As he walks around, he feels the cold tiles against his feet, and he realizes how many times he had walked on the tiles before, but had never felt it at all. “I walked down the windows to one where the shade popped softly in and out with the breeze, and I pressed my head against the mesh.” In this paragraph the imagery of the smells and Chief presses his head against the mesh, appeals to the senses of smell and touch.
One great example is pg 31, junior mentions "My hopes and dreams floated up in a mushroom cloud.” This description shows the sense of hopelessness that overwhelms Junior once he finds out that he is expected to study geometry from the same textbook his mother used more than 3 decades ago. This informs the reader and keeps the reader engaged because everyone knows
Macy Scharpf Chin Honors English 9, Period 4 23 January 2023 Past events can often define the actions someone takes and who they are in the present. If society takes the time to analyze these actions, individuals can figure out the feelings of one another in a certain moment. “Speak” by Laurie Halse Anderson delineates the thoughts and feelings of a teenage girl, Melinda, as she navigates the highs and lows of high school, while carrying the weight of a past traumatic event. In the passage from the book, “Speak”, author Laurie Halse Anderson uses different types of figurative language such as similes and metaphors, as well as repetition to reveal Melinda’s negative thoughts on her past and current feelings about high school.
When writing a novel authors must think not only about what they are about to write, but why they are going to write it. They have to select diction that will convey their inner thoughts and emotions. There is a need of imagery to pull the reader into the story so they will not lose their drive to read. Tone must constantly shift in order to keep the reader so engaged that they are determined to read until it all makes sense. From the longest to the shortest sentence, there is a reason -- called syntax-- why that sentence is there.
The pie by Gary Soto tells the story of a six years old boy. This boy lets the temptation get the best of him leading him to steal a pie. He struggles with the guilt throughout the story feeling as if he has disappointed everyone even though know one knew. Soto uses figurative language such as personification, allusion, metaphors, and similes to entertain the reader. His main intention is entertain but I can argue that he wrote the story to inform as well.
Uncoiling Figurative Language Analysis “Uncoiling” is a poem by Mexican American poet Pat Mora that paints a melancholic picture of a tornado and the destruction it brings. While conveying this message Mora uses personification and Alliteration to more strongly articulate the theme of the poem, examples of these two will be presented and broken down to bring Pat Mora’s message across clearly. Personification in Uncoiling is used solely to make the tornado appear more human. No other objects are discussed in such a way except for actual humans, which serves the purpose of keeping attention on the tornado and describing its appearance and actions in a far more interesting way. Some personification even helps add towards the melancholic tone
Figurative language is using words or phrases differently than the literal definition and is used in literature to provide more drama to the story or to just make the text more interesting. Homer uses many types of figurative language in the text; including similes, metaphors, epithets, personifications, alliterations, and epic similes. In Homer’s poem The Odyssey, figurative language is used to intensify
Figurative Language can help improve a story because it helps you visualize the story and help engage the reader into the
The usage of short sentences gets the point across faster and keeps the reader engaged with the story. It also creates a feeling of realism that the reader is involved in the scene and gives them a feeling that something negative is going to happen. uThe setting also gives an atmosphere of suspense when they are walking down the streets, past the wax dummies shop “Do you suppose if we screamed they’d do anything?” The characters
One example of figurative language in Laurie Hale Anderson’s book “Speak” is when Melinda decides to rid her garden of all weeds, and does some spring cleaning after it finally stops raining during May. Around the same time, Melinda is realizing that she wants to make some new changes in her life and in this figurative language example, Melinda’s life is her garden. She decides first to rake the leaves “suffocating the bushes” ; Melinda is ridding the demons from herself on the first layer of her skin. She says that she has to “fight the bushes (her problems)” and the bushes don’t like getting cleaned out but it is something one has to do if one makes
Figurative language helps boosts the creativity of the reader. Lohrey has used figurative language to help make a situation or experience more relatable and understandable. ANNA & LUKE’S CHANGE TO THE COUNTRY -Lohrey effectively uses a number of techniques to describe people’s
The effect of the figurative language is that the reader can tell how prevalent the hope and fear was, it was as real and as much as the physical money and food. This also creates an emotional effect, as the audience can relate to the hard times that Alexie faced.
Different types of figurative language can change the different readers point of view and the nature of the story. The author of “Kind of a Murder”, Hugh Pentecost, uses figurative language multiple times in his short story, one being the amount of times onomatopoeia was used to the sad parts of the story. In the Morgan MIlitary Academy, it seemed everyone was afraid around the nicknamed headmaster, Old Beaver,at Morgan Military. So when the students heard him coming down the hall in a particular scene, the story reads the sound of shoes, using onomatopoeia. In the text it reads “ordinally his shoes squeaked.
The stories of the World War Two air raids on Hamburg, Germany in the summer of 1943 has forever changed how the world views the Jewish race. The impacts they have had on the modern society’s recognition, views and beliefs of the horrific events have established a better understanding of what a Jewish Hamburger in the 1940’s had to go through during those times and how they had the will to survive. Marione Ingram’s ‘Operation Gomorrah’, relives an adult Jewish Hamburg looking back at their key childhood memories and constructs this survivalist identity through her use of textual form, figurative language, idiom/register and tone in her piece.