What Is The Theme Of The Story The Kid Getting Lost In The Parkway

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The story is about a kid who went to the mall with her mom and got lost in the end. The first part of the story started in her house in the morning. It was the last day of summer and the girl, whose name is Ging, stayed up until 2AM playing with her phone. When it was already morning, she was woken up by her mother, telling her to get up and prepare herself so that they can leave. Her mom told her that they were leaving to buy some school supplies since school is going to start the next day. When they were ready, Ging and her mom went to the diversion highway to ride a bus. She examined her surroundings; the streets were filled with cars in all shapes. Since she was living there for almost 2 years now, so she got used to the sound of screeching wheels and other noises every vehicles produce. Even though she’s being living near the busy highway, she still hated those black smokes being produced by the vehicles and those sand and dirt being swirled by the wind. …show more content…

Since I exactly know what age she was in this experience, it made the story look funny and ridiculous (in a good way). It was actually cute, in that particular age being lost in the mall, desperately asking for help to random people. I haven’t experienced that before to be honest, that’s why I can’t exactly relate to the story. The author should improve her ending since it doesn’t really satisfy me as a reader. She should also describe the part when Ging was exactly feeling when she realized when her mom was gone, when she searching for her home, and the part where she was going to search for her mom in the department store in the end. The point of achievement is that the author successfully arranged the sequence of her story logically. I liked the part where she applied flashbacks and descriptions on things the character mentions just like her experience from the bus and when she examined the rag on the household

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