Hardin's Argument Analysis

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Aiden, the vocabulary you use in your essay is extensive, and contributes to the credibility to your argument. The variety in syntax is also admirable. I also commend you for your extensive summarization of Hardin’s argument. It provided an excellent platform for your argument. When reading Hardin’s essay, I never considered your viewpoint. Upon reading your opinion I can see that your argument is extremely plausible. One suggestion I have for improvement is to work on your transitions. At times your essay appears a bit choppy due to you changing from thought to thought. Overall, this essay was an excellent
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