High School Dropouts
Neil Urbano
DeVry University
High School Dropouts
I. Introduction
A. Thesis Statement: High School students who dropouts matters after they exit school because there is a direct and negative impact on life outcome, the labor market opportunities are limited, and there are disadvantages that leads to poverty.
1) Main Idea: High School students who dropouts matters after they exit school because there is a direct and negative impact on life outcome.
2) Main Idea: High School students who dropouts matters after they exit school because the labor market opportunities are limited.
3) Main Idea: High School students who dropouts matters after they exit school because there are disadvantages that leads to poverty.
II. Main
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Identify why the main idea opposes your thesis statement.
The main idea fully supports the thesis statement and its position that high school dropout matters. In the three main ideas mentioned not one opposes the thesis statement.
B. Provide evidence that will oppose your thesis statement. (Write one sentence summary ideas based on research that you have conducted. Also provide the APA citation and reference. Use at least 1 reference per main idea.)
New ideas and luck could prevent high school dropouts to live a life in poverty. Anyone who engage in business, or as an employee and supported by a good economic trend may put a high school dropout in a good position in the society.
“Similarly, some scholars argue that a healthy local labor market and increases in the minimum wage can pull students out of school. Specifically, if the local labor market offers strong economic opportunities for people without a high school diploma, students will have a greater incentive to drop out (McNeal 2011). Researchers have applied a similar logic to increases in the minimum wage–if the minimum wage increases, high school dropouts can earn more, which will make dropping out more attractive–but there is strong evidence that increases in the minimum wage do not lead to increases in high school dropout rates (Warren and Hamrock
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Do you know of someone that has dropped out of high school? Are they of Hispanic descent? The dropout rate for Hispanic students has gone up to 30 percent nationwide. The saddest thing knowing about all of this is that American born Hispanics is higher than those that immigrate here (“The Hispanic Dropout Mystery,” by Susan Headden, reprinted from U.S. News & World Report, vol. 123, no. 15, October. Used by permission.
“It is my belief that all young people have the ability to achieve at high levels, and it is our responsibility to ensure that they do… This includes having high expectations for students to succeed academically, socially, in their college and career pursuits, and in life” –Antwan Wilson Superintendent of the Oakland Unified School District Community To Be Served For every seven students that earn a diploma from the Oakland Unified School District, three of their peers will never make it to graduation day. In a school district that educates more than 37,000 students, a graduation rate of 67% means that more than 12,000 will drop out before graduating from high school. A disproportionate number of these students are minorities and students
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Mar/Apr2002, Vol. 22 Issue 4, p26 5p one of the main reasons why students drop out of college is caused by the low of founds. At the beginning, they save money for the first year in college but then due to the high cost of the class and the books, they do not have any alternative than start work. Students work in jobs like McDonalds because their lack of experience and there, the pupils must work thirty hours per week to pay their education. Other luckier students can labor part time jobs and with twelve or fifteen hours pay their classes.
According to Michael Dell, a college drop-out and known as the founder of the famous company, Dell, “As you start your journey, the first thing you should do is throw away that store-bought map and begin to draw your own.” This only means that you can’t depend on someone or something to achieve your own goal and as Homer said, “You are the creator of your own destiny.” Success doesn’t rely on academic nor university degree earned, it is achieve through one’s ability to deal with its ambition and make it happen by exerting hard work, perseverance, and patience towards your own good. Success is dissimilar to everyone, it is either personal hard work or through your professionalism that makes someone successful. It’s either personal or professional a person is always looking at improving in some area of a person’s life.