Hi Lana, You are correct, that is a very good thesis statement. The thesis is properly placed, and it contains three sub-topics. A well written thesis with three sub-topics are very important, it will act as a road map telling the audience what is to come. The thesis statement is perhaps the most crucial element of all in an essay.
Thank you for your trust in me. Through intense deliberation I have decided. The money will be given to women suffrage, child labor and deforestation. This money allocation will better the world not only for us but the children of the future. I have decided to give $600,000 as a gift.
Hi Natasha. I have to say, I do admire on how confident and bold you stand with your opinions. Something I have to work on. Going back to your post, I do disagree with your statement about “You will be completely lost in life without it [religion]. You will have no goals, hope, or purpose in life”.
to my GB! i 've seen you being heartbroken, and I always tell you its okay, you 'll meet someone that really deserves you. now, that your with carl I 've seen you cried when your with him, but this tears are tears of joy. pati nga ako naiyak how he asked your parents blessing to marry you. I know that you both our deserving of each others love.
Everyone's favorite online shopping site, Amazon just aired a new commercial advertising their line of Alexa devices. This commercial was strategically designed to appeal to all audiences and persuade them to purchase an Alexa device. This advertisement uses many different rhetorical devices to appeal to an audience. These are pathos, logos, ethos, personification, repetition, colors, clarity and framing. An important part of this commercial was the use of well known celebrities to attract certain people.
2008 AP english lang question 2 In the passage titled The great Influenza written by John Barry he talks about how scientists conduct scientific research and what it takes to be a scientist. He uses rhetorical strategies such as repetition, allusions and rhetorical questions. In the first paragraph Barry uses repetition numerous times with the words such as “certainty and uncertainty”.
A twelve year old boy a world away from his parents once wrote in a letter to his parents: “And I have nothing to comfort me, nor is there nothing to be gotten here but sickness and death.” This child was Richard Frethorne, and in “Letter to Father and Mother,” he communicates his desperation caused by the new world’s merciless environment to his parents to persuade them to send food and pay off his accumulated debts from the journey. He accomplishes this with deliberate word choice and allusions to the bible to appeal to ethos, pathos, and logos. Frethorne uses diction, imagery, and facts to create a letter to his parents which aims to garner sympathy for his state of life and to persuade them to send food and pay off his debts.
Bethany Brookshire, the author of the article “New gene resists our last-ditch drug” found in the Society for Science & the Public, invoked fear and urgency in teen readers fascinated with biology and health. Throughout her article, Brookshire establishes that doctors, farmers, and everyday citizens should be cautious in the use of antibiotics and use methods to limit the spread of harmful bacteria worldwide. She gains her readers’ attention and trust by quoting information from several scientists in different fields and from different parts of the world. Although her syntax was rigid and overly simplified, Brookshire connect to the teen readers ****** Brookshire is professional and *** in her popular article. She maintains an unbiased standpoint
In Maxine Hong Kingston story, “No Name Woman” Kingston uses a story of an unnamed woman who was punished of her adultery and died, to reflect the darkness and the corruption of the. My essay will analyze the rhetoric and narration of the article and expound the significance of using technique and story. The story was titled by “No Name Woman” which seem mean nameless. However, nameless is generally use to describe something that is an unknown or name was not given. The woman is not unknown.
In Florence Kelley’s heart wrenching call for awareness of child labor she uses quite a few rhetorical devices. An anaphora is the most recognizable as she’s trying to nail in how she would could be helping the children. Pathos is another of her persuasion methods used in her tone. Kelley also uses a fair amount of imagery throughout the passage. First and foremost, Kelley’s use of an anaphora is what really pulls the audience’s attention.
Academic performance and listening to a certain type of music does not affect one another. Listening to Hip Hop is some students ways of trying to fit in with a certain group of friends. " The common assumption is that teens who dress in a certain way or act tough are in gangs or aspire to lives outside mainstream society, but when you talk with them, you discover that the way they dress or challenge authority in class often doesn't mean that at all” (Blagg). Among teenagers, listening to a certain type of music and dressing a certain way portrays a message, but that message doesn’t correlate with academic performance.