1) In Kent Haruf’s “To See Your Story Clearly, Start Pulling the Wool Over Your Own Eyes he speaks about his writing process and how he uses blind writing. If I started to blind write it would most definitely add to the amount of editing that I would have to do to complete the essay or paper that was being written. Although with the use of blind writing I would be able to get my ideas down onto the paper before I forgot it due to fixing a mistake that I found by looking back into the previously written sentences. Haruf also writes in length about his surrounding when he writes. He always writes in the same place with the same items around him. Using this practice might heighten my focus on what I am writing because of the minimal amount of distractions that would be in my surroundings.
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In Carl Hiaasen’s “Real Life, That Bizarre and Brazen Plagiarist” Hiaasen uses the real
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Repeat Steps 2 and 3 as Needed.” Using Sontag’s very simply stated process would improve my work greatly instead of just not editing. Editing has the capability of making works more eloquent, more understandable and even more enjoyable. Through editing the writer is also allowed to fix their sentence structures so they make more sense. Without editing no writing would be simply good enough.
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In Rick Brass’ “To Engage the World More Fully, Follow A Dog” Brass Speaks of his relationship with his hunting dog, Colter and how he never intended to write two whole books him. While some may take this advice literally and follow their dog I believe the tool here to try things that you don’t know the outcome to. Because he tried to writing about his dog once it lead to two whole books. Brass is trying to inspire new writers to be creative and creativity can help a piece of work be more interesting and attention grabbing. By using this tool when needed my writing would come off as more
As he finds his passion Ritland is training to become a SEAL and finds the MWD program that he instantly falls in love with. The book then skips over to him actually training these dogs and the skills that each dog acquires from the training. As the dogs continue their training Ritland evolves an emotional connection to each dog and connects that emotion to multiple scenarios where it really moves the reader to think about the dog and human relationship. The book then reaches the point where the dogs are getting deployed and goes over stories of each dog and their handlers. These stories become the climax as each dog is quickly put to the test in Iraq and there is that uncertainty that the dog will come out ok after each mission.
Double Entry Journal “Scar it, give it a twisted branch – perfect trees don’t exist. Nothing is perfect. Flaws are interesting. Be the tree” (pg. 177)
Donald Murray's "The Maker's Eye: Reviewing Your Own Manuscripts, an excerpt from Writer (1973), and William Zinsser's "Simplicity", an excerpt from On Writing Well (1976), both argue that excessive verbiage and cluttered language do more harm than good. While Murray states this in passing to illustrate the importance of revision, Zinsser chooses to make his essay focus entirely on the matter. Murray uses a plethora of other author's opinions to reinforce his point, trading concision for additional evidence. Contrarily, Zinsser only uses four quotes, two to show excessive verbiage, one to show a simple and effective statement, and another to show that he is not alone in his belief. Where Murray draws out his essay to make it clear why simple
Quarterly Writing Assessment I would like to explain a theme from two short stories, the most dangerous game and also Harrison Bergeron. One of the main themes out of these stories is pursuit of perfection. I chose this theme because it a very informative theme in these stories. I also chose these stories because I found most examples so I can further explain this theme. I can also further explain another theme that is the challenging of authority and tradition between the stories Harrison Bergeron and the last dog.
These quotes show that the man in "To Build a Fire" knows exactly what to do, where to step, what to look for, and what to listen for. And that the dog was forced to play its role in helping the man through the journey. Again this shows that these characters have a "superhero and sidekick"
In her essay "Does Texting Affect Writing?", Michaela Cullington presents her argument that texting does not impact formal writing written by students. She discusses the concerns presented by many people about how texting language can transfer into writing, but through the use of personal experiences and credible sources she discusses how this is not true. Her use of multiple different studies and situations help boost her argument and allow the reader to truly see how students actually do formal writing. She presents a strong argument as to why those who believe students don't have the control and knowledge to write formally, instead of with text speak, are wrong.
Carr realizes this while talking about Friedrich Nietzsche and when he acquired his typewriter, saying “…the machine has a subtler effect on his work. One of Nietzsche’s friends, a composer, noticed a change in the style of his writing His already terse prose had become even tighter, more telegraphic” (Carr, 591). After years of writing with pen and paper, the typewriter was able to change his style of writing even if he did not realize it himself. I can see this happening with myself.
Finally it discusses,“in a dog 's life, some plaster would fall, some cushions would open, some rugs would shred. Like any relationship, this one had its costs. They were costs we came to accept and balance against the joy and amusement and protection and companionship he gave us.” At the end he realized although training his dog would have made his life less stressful he loved his crazy
After reading the first chapter, writing with Style, from “Thinking Well”, by John R. Trimble, he made it seem as if he was writing about my writing when he explained a novice writer. Trimble explains how a novice writer would write by giving examples of how their style of writing looks like. For example, Trimble explains how new writers unconsciously write and how they are not aware of their egocentrism. He states what a novice would have to achieve objectivity, empathy, courtesy and social sensitivity in order for him to have a readable style. Trimble then discusses what makes a veteran writer and how their thinking process reflects their writing situation.
To be able to write down anything I have to be in a place where I feel comfortable expressing my ideas. As a writer I will overthink everything I say in my writing, whether it sounds stupid or sophisticated, but I have to be careful with what I want to do because I need to focus on getting the message
Not So Fast”, conducts her own study with a few colleagues to take notes on how students writing skills are changing. She decides to conduct another one twenty five years later to see how much the writing skills have changed since technology has been updated and became more available to students. She found that “students today are writing more than ever before.” Although we still have the same amount of writing errors as before, the patterns of errors are different. Many people argue that technology is only making our writing skill worse, this study helps to prove a different theory.
I selected these two papers because I thought they were the two I could most improve on. With the “The Sounds” I worked on grammar and rewording a few cliche’ sayings. I also added a little of dialogue and fixed my work cited page and finally cleaned up the ending, and also added a little to it. With the “The Teen Suicide Epidemic” I again worked on grammar and also some spelling.
A bomber. Deception. Secrets. The Westing Game had these and more. Sixteen strangers living in an apartment, all under the impression they are the neighbor of a murderer.
Mark Twain believes that dogs are superior to man because out of all animals, man is the only one that is cruel enough to inflict pain on others just for the pleasure of doing it. Twain’s short story “A Dog’s Tale”, written in 1903, displays these beliefs and is done so from a dog’s point of view. This unusual take on the story is used to help convey the theme that one shouldn’t assume the others will do the same for them. The story includes literary elements such as characterisation, structural irony and a plot and conflict. It is a story of a loyal and heroic dog which unfortunately ends in an ironic twist of fate.
This paper looks at the art of cursive handwriting. In the beginning it delves into the history of the art, how it began and evolved over a varying times periods. The paper looks at the important reasons why cursive has been used and celebrated throughout a big time period of time, and how cursive has helped mankind evolve. The research looks at current and ongoing removal of cursive from many schools in the education sector; it asks why cursive is deemed no longer important to mankind today. The paper looks at the rise of computer based information technology and how this medium is fast replacing many old techniques.