Military Service Outline

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Topic Sentence: Military service is not a good fit for everyone.

Detail A: Discipline is a key factor in armed forces that does not fit with all.

Detail B: Military teambuilding could be affected due to rapid changeover.

Detail C: Some religion groups will not want their people to fight if war breaks out.

Thesis Sentence (restated in different words):

As Americans we have the right to choose how we want to support ourselves and family which could be by continuing your education after high school. Mandatory military service will not guarantee our military will be stronger and is not a good fit for everyone that that would hurt our overall readiness in the military.
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