Essay On Mobile Commerce

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Mobile Commerce - A Description of the Trend

Introduction
Mobile commerce occurs when a purchase is made with a Smartphone or tablet. In an attempt to determine how mobile commerce has become such a steadily growing trend, statistics from the phenomenon eBay is investigated. Ebay is one of world’s greatest trading markets on the Internet platform. According to Pierre Omidyar (2015), eBay was founded in 1995 by the person concerned and it rapidly developed to a phenomenon within the Internet industry. The first modern Smartphone iPhone was launched in the year 2007 by Apple as stated on Apple`s (2015) home page. Smartphones henceforth revolutionized within electronic commerce through their applications.
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Mobile commerce is simply a way to compromise with time – you can shop quicker and easier online than getting around in fifteen different stores to find what you seek, additionally to best price. We can therefore presume that mobile commerce is here to stay.

Reflection:
The introduction now starts with a sentence that explains the trend in an easy way. Before, according to my peer-reviews’ the introduction was a little unclear so I added the first sentence to state clearer what the trend basically is.
I used thesaurus.com, ozdic.com, Google translate and prowritingaid.com to make my text. I have also rewritten some sentences so they feel more fluent.
I chose to write out the whole name “mobile commerce” instead of using the contraction “m-commerce” so that there is no confusion.
I changed a bunch of words to more formal and also so that words got a more correct meaning e.g. Shows=presents, Weekend=Week-end, Mobile shop=make purchases through the mobile, Where=were, Consisting=Permanent, Looking=Analyzing, Much=frequently, A sort=kind, Where=only, some reasons=major reason, Growing=flourishing, Easy=Uncomplicated, Evident=proven,

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