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Shush Your Wien: Poem Analysis

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Shush Your Wien Draft one: Little Eaglet, ahh, nah this is not the perfect essay for submitting, who would even want to read it my 15 pages?! Draft two: The day of my death. Well this is has great words but not a great personal narrative. Draft three: The real I was gone. Yes, this one is good but too short “Ooh Lucy you’ve spent the whole day on your essay and you are still not getting what to write about, Just sleep and close your eyes everything will be alright when you wake up!” said Wien Wien is my friend, a friend ? Well not really, he entertains me but a poor adviser. I guess I will have to follow his advice now, I have no other alternative. Laying on my bed staring at the ceiling wondering what to write about, that time when you feel unfulfilled knowing that starting over again would yield the best …show more content…

You know girls at that age are likely to have only one topic to talk about “Boyfriends” yes of course that is also what we used to talk about not we but they .I had nothing to say to them I had no boyfriend. I was not going to admit it in front of everyone but I always wonder why I don’t have one while all my friends had them not that I was not beautiful, actually I was and much more than they were (giving myself too much credits) Wien would say “which boy would wish to date a nerd like you?” that’s how he/she is, always discouraging. a year later my family left to another city.as any other stranger I knew no one

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