"The bane of my existence, the nightmare that will not end, the thing that has practically driven me to insanity,"these are the phrases I used to describe the college essay.I had never been in a situation so stressful that I wanted to just sit in a corner and scream into an abyss, as I rapidly flipped my lips up and down with my finger. This is coming from a person who has lived in unstable homes throughout their childhood and lived in a toxic environment in their teenage years.
The first time I finished writing an essay; I thought I had written a masterpiece, the cream of the crop, one of the best essays of all time even. I'll admit I shouldn't have put so much confidence in my paper, but I was proud of my work. My English
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Anyone could become a Beta Club member if they had decent grades and eighteen dollars.The same could be said about the National English Honor Society. Everyone at an Ivy League school or top-tier school has a phenomenal grade point average. I felt that I didn't have a personal achievement that made me stand out from the crowd.
Since I felt I couldn't compose an essay about my personal achievements; I savagely searched the internet for college essays that got students accepted into good schools and advice given by admission officers. I was then disappointed, saddened, and a little bit angered by what I had seen. All the student essays I read were all these whimsical tells or extraordinary events, that either made the admissions officers laugh or cry. I read how admission officers were sick of the stories of overcoming challenges, immigrant parents, sick relatives, etc. Then I stepped away from the computer and asked myself
In our world, what we learn shapes who we can become. The American dream has always been you can come to the United States and become whatever you would like to be. How true is this? As analyzing and communicating has sky rocketed with our technology and certain trends have become apparent to everyone. Some schools seem to test so poor while others seem to exceed expectations.
The National Honor Society (NHS) is a notoriously prestigious organization, and it is possibly one of the greatest honors a student can earn in their high school career. Becoming a member of the NHS can open many doors for students, including leadership experience and opportunities for college scholarships. Admission for this program is based on certain ideals. The criteria for admission-scholarship, service, character, and leadership-are four areas in which, at least I believe, I excel. Even when I was a young child, I was very concerned with school.
Scholarship, Leadership, Service, and Character are the four pillars of the National Honor Society, and I believe that I exemplify these characteristics in many different ways. I also believe these are characteristics that every person should have inside and outside of work or school. I am not an expert in all of these categories, but I know that, if given the opportunity, I can and will prove that I have these qualities and represent them well. I believe that my teachers would attest to my academic abilities. I am aware, however, that the term “Scholarship” does not just relate to grades and school academics.
To be in National Junior Honor Society you have to have good character, citizenship,service, and leadership. First, I have good character. I take criticism willingly, and I also welcome recommendations. Second, I demonstrate citizenship well. Civic involvement is very important, and I have high regard to freedom, justice, and respect for the American form of government.
At my high school, the Beta Club is the most elite, respected, and prestigious club. It is filled with the leaders, the doers, the hard-working, and the individuals who turn their dreams into reality. It is not for everyone, and in our ever-changing society, that is clear. Most people today do not like to rise up to the ever-growing challenge of leadership. It takes a certain kind of person to be a good leader, and the Beta Club has greatly helped me in doing so.
It is an extraordinary honor to be considered as a candidate for the National Honor Society. Being considered means I have achieved my goal in demonstrating my determination- in school and outside of school- and my willingness to aid people in my community. Being a part of such a prestigious organization is an enormous responsibility to which I will fully devote my time. Ever since I was a freshman, my goal was to work diligently to be among the highest scholars and to be accepted into this scholarly “hall of fame”. Through my relentless hard work and perseverance, I believe that I possess the four characteristics of a National Honor Society member- leadership, service, character, and scholarship.
This is what the National Honor Society hopes for in a member. I know i’m not perfect and can make mistakes at times, but acknowledging that takes a lot of character. My academic achievements are a result of my determination and drive to ensure that i’ll be able to achieve success in the future as well as serve as role model to the younger siblings and cousins in my family. Getting good grades is a priority to me. Having a XX GPA and being a Distinguished Varsity Scholar for the past 3 years didn 't happen by luck, it happened because of the sheer dedication I have towards my school and
I believe that I manifest the four pillars that the National Honor Society values. I display scholarship by working hard to achieve good grades in all high school and college courses I am enrolled in. I believe it’s important to raise my own standards in the classroom and I understand that my high school education directly affects not only college, but every day after my education. I demonstrate leadership by having confidence in myself to be a good leader for others.
When I first hear about National Honor Society in the beginning of my middle school years I knew that it was something I not only wanted to be a part of but that I was meant to be a part of. Growing up much of my time was spent around adults causing me to mature quickly and realize things others my age did not. I have always been driven and independent and accept noting but the best from myself especially when it comes to academics. I maintained straight A's all throughout my education up until high school. Having a 6.4 GPA freshman year and a 6.1 GPA at the beginning of junior year as well as being number 141 of 713 in my class.
The National Honor Society is built upon four founding principles: Scholarship, Character, Leadership, and Service. I have a high school life filled with dedication to these four principles on the Spiritual standpoint, the Familial level, the Community level and finally at the National level. Moreover, I did begin my dedication to these same four principles even before this starting with the Boy Scouts of America and this commitment will continue along with having a rich future when I reach my fullest potential. I firmly believe that to have academic excellence is giving your best effort to maintain not just having straight As and a high GPA at or close to the edge of attaining a 4.0, but to also have the skills that help you perform your very best in college and beyond. To recap, it is having a well-rounded education with just the right academics and activities best suited to your
From here it becomes easy right? No. the next obstacle I must face is writing the essay itself. Doing work is a bit like brushing your teeth; you know you will thank yourself if you do it, but you still have that bit of hesitation which nibbles on you every time you must. I knew I had no choice though.
My instructor Jennifer Jackson said this time “ Bravo! This is one of the strongest revisions I’ve seen yet.” This essay gave me so much confidence and made me feel I can actually write something interesting. Also, I sent my paper to The Writing Center, after I submitted my paper to my instructor to see any other mistakes I could have to improve my writing skills.
I’m going to be honest, this is the fourth time I’ve written this essay. I’ll write a good two hundred words or so, thinking this is it, this is the one I’m going to turn in, and suddenly I’ll realise that I really don’t know where I’m going with any of it. You’d think writing five hundred words or less about yourself would be pretty simple, but it isn’t. My problem is that I’ve got it in my head that this is my one big chance to get into my school of choice, which means it has to be perfect.
My expectations coming into the course were high and remained high throughout the duration of the course. The essays I wrote in the class really challenged me to progress in my writing skills. The illustration essay really served as an example of what not to do when writing at a college level. My approach of the essay was really misunderstood and grammatically incorrect.
This semester in English 1100, College Composition 1, I have learned a lot. At the beginning of this semester, I had set my mind that I was certainly going to achieve and learn a lot. During the start of the semester, I had several difficulties writing the English essay assignments especially in terms of expanding, grammar, and picking good enough topics. I have not had an English class since junior year of high school and that was about 3 and a half years ago. During the first week of the semester I sat down, prepared my thoughts and understood that throughout the semester I had to achieve all that I had planned for this semester.