Narrative About A Water Ride

Personal Narrative Draft 5:

In this story I will be talking about the amazing water ride in Universal studios, Singapore. I still remember till this day, how many times I rode that ride. For last 7 years we have been going to a lot of amusement parks like 6 Flags, Disneyland, MGM Studio, Lego Land, Epcot Center, Etc. When me, my mom, my dad, and my sister jumped in the car, I was as ready as can be.

I was very excited when I read the map of Universal Studio. All of a sudden I became greedy and wanted to go to the Harry Potter ride, Transformer ride, Indiana Jones ride, Star wars ride, etc. While we did all the rides, me and my Mom were doing some of the scary rides, while my dad and my sister were doing some kid rides. My whole family continues

We get the first seats!!!!”, I whooped.

When we went on the raft, I was pumped. This raft was huge and I was going down a mountain of water!!! Ready to go, I thought. I made it a point that I HAVE to be in the first seats. Me and my Dad rushed but still couldn 't get to the first seat. But still, our goal was the first seat. We quickly ran to the manager of the ride and asked him for the first seats. Luckily the people in the first seats had a child who was too small to ride so we were given the front seats. I was so ready to go down huge slides. When we were slowly moving some people started booing. Then I heard some mumbling. I didn’t hear very much but I am pretty sure they mumbled, “ This ride sucks. There was no point waiting so long”.
“Dad??? How long will is this going to take??? ”, I announced trying to show off like I was getting bored too.
“I don’t know son”, my dad replied.
All we did was wait until, “AHHHHHHHHHH”, everyone in the crate yelled.
It was a huge drop that went down like a thousand feet. Then we went into the dark. “Wow!!! Is this the end?”, I thought. Well, I was definitely wrong. Once again, “AHHHHHHHHHH”, we yelled as we dropped once again. After several more small slides, we came to the BIG DADDY. It took around at least 4 minutes to go up the

No reply. I guess he was ready for the HUGE fall that was coming. Then we got to see how far down it is. When I saw how far down the fall was I almost had a heart attack!!! Well, there is no turning back now, I thought. It was higher than any of the huge water slides I have ever seen. And then we fell. We went down so fast we couldn 't even scream!!!! In the video we could only see our mouths open and eyes wide. Plus we were soaking!!!!
“Wicked Dad!!. Let 's go again!!!!!”, I whooped.
I kept on insisting to my dad that we go on this epic ride again and again. Usually he would have a stomach ache or something. Fortunately, he replied with a yes!!!! We dashed off like a rocket to get my mom and my sister and we went again and it was a blast. My Dad figured out that there was a fast pass. I was going so crazy, he decided he will pay 50$ for a Fast Pass so we do not have to wait in line for another 3 hours.

From this day on, whenever my mom and dad say, “Kids, where do you wanna go this summer”, me and my sister say, UNIVERSAL STUDIOS!!!!! I chose to write this story because this was a great time for me. I loved how there were many falls and how time flew while we were waiting in line. This is very important to me because many of the water rides that I have been to are very short and boring, but this one, this one blows your