The first section is about the introduction of my speech. The specific purpose and central idea in my speech were clear. I would say I gained most of my audience’s attention in the introduction and that it was effective. My attention getter does orient the audience to my topic. I think it snagged most people’s attention and did motivate my audience to listen. I did not reveal my qualifications or credibility in my speech. I did not relate the topic to the audience by stating how it might affect them personally. I did include a preview of the main points in my speech. The overall effectiveness of my introduction would be an eight out of a ten-point scale. I could improve the introduction of my speech by including the “motivate us to listen” …show more content…
The main points of my speech were to inform my audience of three things about a Nurse Anesthetist: the role and work environments, the education and clinical training it takes to become a CRNA, and the annual income of a CRNA. My main points were very easy to identify. I used many transition words and had smooth transitions between each main point. I used examples, statistics, and facts as supporting material in my presentation. The supporting material was easy to understand and sufficient to my claims. I would say I gave clear step by step facts during my second main point. My statistics and examples helped me explain and deliver the information that was needed for my third main point. I would characterize my use of language as simple, clear, precise, and easy to follow. I did have at least six citations in my outline and delivered out loud in my speech, but most of them did not have all four parts completed. However, my citations did have at least the source and date provided. I did cite the source and date of my images. My transitions were clearly stated and they did tell the previous point and introduce the next point. I did stay within the required time limit, my time was five minutes and 30 seconds. I could improve the body of my speech by including all four parts to a complete citation in my outline and while delivering my speech. I believe the body section of my speech was a really informative and it was well put together. This section is about the conclusion of my speech. I did signal the end of my speech by starting with “Today I have shared with you” and I did review my three main points. I did not have a memorable close to my conclusion. The closing of my speech was mostly effective. I could improve my conclusion by including a memorable close at the end and finishing off with a different tone in my voice to really let the audience know that this is the end of my
I must have a plan. How I will go how I will complete the task that’s given consult with collides for their understanding, I search for examples. I ask question for clarity on the instruction given. I’m at comfort when I execute my plan and complete the task. Precision: {USE AS
The United States of America is faced with many problems and concerning topics every year. Every citizen holds on tightly to their own beliefs and viewpoints, ultimately hoping the nation’s leader can lead the country in the right direction. Every election year, the next presidential candidate gives an important speech, known as the inaugural address. In this address, the candidate informs the nation of his or her intentions as the president. In these inaugural speeches, the upcoming presidents use many different rhetorical strategies to get their main points to the citizens of the country.
It is essential to make readers aware of what arguments and rhetorical choice you are going to talk about in the paragraph. You offered strong evidence to support your claims. You effectively explained how the rhetorical device connected to the author’s purpose and audience. You also explained properly how the rhetorical strategy works. Your use of quotes and in-text citation is well done but do not forget that the author’s last name must be included in MLA style unless it is unknown.
He responded to the audience by pausing for their applause instead of attempting to speak over them. He used simple words to convey maximum understanding by the audience. He also quoted former presidents to draw attention to how things have changed since their times. When accenting certain points he used a stronger voice. Some of these points were about people joining together for the national interest, and building a generation of peace.
What makes a speech effective? Using rhetoric, a person can appeal to others emotion and logic to persuade a person into doing a desired action. They can encourage a person into success or they can discourage a person into wanting to prove others wrong. The two speeches that will be discussed in this paper will be from Remember the Titans Gettysburg Speech and Glory Road Final game speech. The Gettysburg speech was made in the middle of movie.
I felt the speech was slow moving and carefully executed. However, since it’s a political speech, it means he has to pay extra attention to what’s he is saying and what the people are taking away from it. I myself felt the speech was persuasive. Its premise reminded me of what
My fourth assignment will be discussing and analyzing presenting insights and findings. In the first part, I will be writing about different components of report. In the second part, I will be discussing and analyzing presentation and its parts. In the last part, I will be adding my point of view including recommendation and will be ending my assignment with conclusion and references.
“Harrison Bergeron” Group Writing Directions: Complete the task according to the assignment below. Write each group member’s name next to their assignment, and turn in one assignment for your group. Answer the following prompt: How is the theme your team wrote evident in the short story “Harrison Bergeron”? Provide text-based evidence to support your chosen theme. Follow the standard conventions of American English and MLA format.
The speech is convincing as it has all the persuasive elements and the speech is delivered by a person that has high credibility and considered as trustworthy
I consider this the most important thing because this 30 second speech that I will be giving to my potential employers is the first impression they will have of me. From what I’ve learned, first impressions can’t be stressed enough. On top of that, at a career fair, this 30 second speech is the only thing these recruiters have to judge me by other than by my
The first thing you say should be your attention grabber.) INTRODUCTION Attention Grabber: (Statement to wake the audience up/ make sure they are listening!) In America, people are allow to use gun, around 93 americans are killed with gun on an average day in America. Thesis: (Tell listeners what action you want them to take—OR—how you want them to think.)
Did they have a PREVIEW? Do they use any CITATIONS? What were the MAIN POINTS in the speech? HOW was the speaker’s CONCLUSION EFFECTIVE or not?
Rationale Written task: Britt Wesseling I have chosen a ted talk as my text type, because I think this is a great opportunity to advice people on how to be a great public speaker. The ted talk shows several techniques on how you can be a good public speaker. Being a good public speaker is having the ability to persuade and influence your audience in order to send your message. Great leaders are one of the best examples, because their goal is of course to inspire and activate the listeners.
I realized that in the claim statement i needed to include the name of the story along with the author and I had forgotten about that part. I also noticed that some of their presentations related to today’s society more than other. I should have focused more about how it impacts society today in my presentation rather than just analyzing the text and the outside sources. I also saw that my presentation had more color, fonts, and visual transitions than the others and I thought I did a good job on
Each student in my class had to give three types of presentations, an impromptu speech, an informative speech and the most challenging the persuasive speech which was a group assignment. Section One – You as an audience member If I had been a member of my audience I think I would have enjoyed listening to me especially in my informative and persuasive speech. I was very well prepared and know what I was talking about.