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Offer comments and observations about your writing of this first story. Be specific in your responses to the following:

What aspects of your story came easiest for you? Explain.
When it comes to writing, I am a very visual person. I like to write in pictures and the action follows. So the descriptive detail was probably the easiest for me. 

What areas gave you the most difficulty? Why?
Once I begin, I have a really hard time stoping myself from going in a completely random direction. Closing the story was probably the hardest part for me.

What about your story pleases you most?
The story line is something I am the most pleased about. When I began writing, I only knew that I wanted someone chained to a planet. Then everything else followed

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