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Personal Narrative-A Completely Blank Evaluation Sheet

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A completely blank evaluation sheet: I was furious. The coach didn’t even give me a chance. I was given the blind eye, the cold shoulder. I left everything out on the court and it was like I never showed up. The next day I returned with my blank paper in my hand. I waited for what seemed like forever but found, within me, the courage to walk inside. Without saying a word, I held up my blank piece of paper in front of him. “It wasn 't a mistake, you just aren’t tall enough”, said the coach looking down at me. That one sentence, twisted a knife in my heart. I was told I couldn’t do what I love all because my physical stature. I was completely destroyed; I couldn’t stop hearing his words replay in my head, but I wasn 't going to let his

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