Personal Narrative Analysis

You are 10 years old. It is 10:00 at night. You hear noises in your kitchen, then someone walks into your room. They put a bag over your head and take you to a house. They take the bag off and you see other children. There is a mom, a dad, a sister, a brother and you. They all look scared. The house looks like a normal house. There are three men there. They are all holding guns. One has a Glock 45, the second one has a shotgun, and the last one has an AK-47. The one with the Glock says to call him dad, the one with the shotgun says to call him uncle and the on the with the AK says call him grandpa.

Every 30 minutes you hear very loud gunshots. All the doors and windows have bars on them. They give you a bed, but it feels like you are sleeping on nails. You constantly hear gunshots. Your ¨mom¨ wakes wakes you up the next morning. You walk into the kitchen and you see a plate of eggs, she says ¨take two and go sit down¨. You finish eating, but then ¨grandpa¨ comes and tells you follow him. You go into the basement and you see about 5 children down there. They all are at sowing machines. ¨Grandpa¨ gives you a stick and says ¨if they talk wack them¨. ¨grandpa¨ goes up stairs, they start talking, you remember what he said, but you don't want to hurt anyone.

He grabs you by the arm and takes out side. An old rusty grey van pulled up. ¨Dad¨ says go grab my package from the van. You grab it and almost drop it from how heavy it is. Your veins are popping out of your arms. You finally put it in the garage. While you are outside you find a spot that you can escape from. That night you tell your ¨brother¨ about