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Personal Narrative: My First Draft

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For me, the hard part was to actually know who I am. I could not find a word that could have describe me. Until I found the word anxious. The easy part was actually talking about the topic. I really wanted to show everyone the things I go through every day. When revising my first draft I found many mistakes that could have hurt my

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