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Personal Narrative: My Revision Strategy

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My revision strategy will be to take more detailed notes. To use the strategies we have learned, like building my key points of evidence. I will also start working on my final essay weeks ahead. This will enable me to receive feedback from the writing center to help revise my essay. In conclusion, I will use my feedback to create a well taught out and a more organized picture of my analyzation of Some lessons from the assembly line.

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