Reflection On 1984

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My intro is not very good because I do not have a good thesis statement; my thesis statement was not very specific. My intro is not very strong and a little boring, if I was able to rewrite the intro I would make it more interesting for the reader. I would try to make the thesis statement stronger in order to make a more direct point for my paper. By rewriting my thesis I could make it clear to the reader that the theme of 1984 is the government controlling people. I could use the tiqatiqa format to help give direction in my writing and give a better reasoning and support. I did not answer an interpretive question; to help the reader better understand what the purpose of the paper is I could be more direct with my question.

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