Rhetorical Analysis Rough Draft In Carl L. Hart’s “The Real Opioid Emergency,” Hart points out to his readers an important issue connected to opioid abuse and treatment. In light of rising awareness of opioid abuse, Hart expresses in a The New York Times article that there has historically been racism in the difference white and black drug abusers are treated. Carl Hart is speaking from multiple positions of experience. He is an African-American professor of neuroscience and psychology at Columbia University, where he is known for his research in drug abuse and drug addictions. Additionally, Hart speaks from second-hand experience, which he is quick to point out in the article. Within the first paragraph, he speaks of his “90-minute trek...to …show more content…
He gives heavy claims and statistics throughout his article, using the rhetorical appeal logos. Hart claims that in the late 1980’s the “majority of crack users were white” and “most drug users buy their drugs from dealers within their own racial group.” While Hart certainly expresses these statements confidently, he does not support them with statistics or sources. It is difficult to believe that the majority of drug users in the crack epidemic of the late 1980’s were white when this issue was felt by numerous black individuals in the inner cities. Hart hopes to persuade his audience to believe him with these passionate, strong statements but fails to provide support for these claims. However, there are points that Hart gives specific statistics and numbers. For example, Hart states “more than 80 percent of those convicted of heroin trafficking are black or Latino, although all racial groups buy drugs at roughly the same rate” (Hart). Yes, this is a convincing statement that supports Hart’s argument, however, there are no sources to rearticulate it. There are multiple instances of this being the case, unfortunately, the only evidence to back his statements is a link within his article to another publication. As a result, while Hart’s use of logos may appear strong at first, it is difficult to check his facts and see the depth of his …show more content…
Who better to speak on this issue than a very intelligent African-American professor at a nationally acclaimed university who also devotes his time to speak with individuals at a correctional facility about drug and behavior course. Unfortunately, I was not satisfied with the credibility he portrayed. Outside of the first and last paragraphs, Hart does not mention his personal connection to the issue, so his audience is left to believe that the information he lays out is based on research. However, Hart does not cite multiple and fails to prove himself as an entirely believable author. After further investigation, one can learn Hart’s impressive credentials, but is a professor of neuroscience and psychology necessarily qualified to be outlining the apparent racism attached to drug abuse? I felt this was a definite weakness in his article. I personally wanted to agree with him and felt compelled to through his claims, statistics, and passionate rhetoric, but his lack of sources and support certainly weaken his argument. Especially in an article where some of his claims seem spotty, Hart should feel pushed to give effective evidence. The only reason I can think for the lack of sources is that Hart wanted to make his article more personal, instead of just another statistical, history sheet. If this was the case, I would feel further persuaded if he could have expressed himself and actually
Addressing police brutality must be done with empathy for and awareness of the plight of the African-American community. Historically speaking, there has not been a period wherein the African-American community was not inhibited by institutionalized barriers. American enslavement provided the foundation for later oppressive provisions that are especially prevalent within inner-city, predominantly Black communities, which, incidentally, many of the prominent instances of police brutality have taken place. Political regimes like the “war on drugs,” “school to prison pipeline,” and mass incarceration criminalize and dehumanize the African-American community, and thus affect the collective mindset of the population. I believe that an imperative first step that has not been taken is acknowledging the effects these may have on the Black community.
This statement can be seen as bias because the author includes the words “a minor traffic infraction”.(Internal Citation) Without knowing everything that happened we do not know if it was only a minor infraction. This source uses logos to appeal to the audience. By using logos the author appeals to the reader's’ intellect. ‘’Jail booking documents show Bland wrote that she had attempted suicide after suffering a miscarriage last year and that she was epileptic, which Cooper said was true. But she noted the documents also show that Bland said she had not been depressed and wasn’t depressed at the time of her arrest.’’
It is an existing theory that our society is constructed via racial dimensions, and that racial equality is a figment of the imagination. This very principle is highlighted in Michelle Alexander’s novel, “The New Jim Crow.” The specific dimensions covered within the text include the unjust aspects of the federal drug policy, and by connection that of mass incarceration as well. Alexander claims that racism is still very prominent in present day society and is direct and frank about the heavy influence of white supremacy. One of the main arguments pushed by Alexander in this book is that mass incarceration is “ a stunningly comprehensive and well-disguised system of racialized social control that functions in a manner strikingly similar
She first supports her claim by chronicling America 's history of institutionalized racism and systematic disenfranchisement of African Americans. Then, she discusses America 's War on Drugs that disproportionately targets minorities and finally as she examines the hardship faced by felons she compares and contrasts Jim Crow Laws to mass incarceration. Alexander surmises that mass incarceration is designed to maintain white supremacy and sustain a racial classification system. Alexander 's book is relevant to my research paper because she provides evidence that the criminal justice system is rooted in racism and directly linked to the racist agenda of the white supremacist. Broussard, B. (2015).
Bullying Essay Bullying is definitely prominent and for sure exists to this day. It is based on the color of your skin, and still are stopped based on what they look like rather than what they are doing. I personally have never been stopped but, i know that it exists and i know how i would react.
By the preliminary year of 1990s, the crack period that engulfed New York City in the 1980s was on the path to failure and delinquency percentages were correspondingly decreasing. But Randol Contreras noticed something special on the roads in South Bronx community where he grew up. Randol observed how his drug-distributing friends were no longer making money from retailing crack, but were revolving to mugging other dealers for a progressively deteriorating segment of the drug domain. Randol Contreras wrote the book, The Stickup Kids: Race, Drugs, Violence, and the American Dream. Randol shadowed a unit of Dominican males from streets of New York who were born at the end of the Crack Era.
Second, point that Bennett argued, "Legalization will eliminate the black market." He refuted this argument because he has proven it wrong. Evidence to justify this statement is that "If government drugstores do not stock crack, addicts will find it in the clandestine market or simply hake it themselves from their legally purchased cocaine." Meaning that some of the drugs are just too dangerous to be sheltered by the law. He creates fear to show how the distribution of drugs cannot be
In The New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in The Era of Colorblindness by Michelle Alexander, she begins by points out the underlying problem in our Criminal Justice system. The problem being prioritizing the control of those in this racial caste rather than focusing on reasonable punishment and efforts to deter crime. Alexander begins by speaking of her experience as a civil rights lawyer and what soon became her priority after seeing a poster that mentioned how the war on drugs is the new jim crow when it comes to the application and outcome of it. As Alexander points out the correlation between the war on drugs and it being the new jim crow, she discusses the mass incarceration that is prevalent in our society and the number of African American
Author and editorial writer, Brent Staples acknowledges this issue as well as experience many situations in which people distinguish him from others. Brent Staples message in his essay titled “Just Walk On By” is conveyed to the audience through many rhetorical devices in which he suggests that stereotypes of race and gender can impact someone 's life in the easiest ways. Brent Staples use of pathos creates an emotional connection and pulls the reader into his essay, through his anecdotes and diction. His intro paragraph tells an interesting story, in a way that readers often forget what type of passage they are reading. Staples uses of phrases such as “my first victim”, “seemed menacingly close” “picked up her pace” and notably “running in earnest” (1-2).
For example, Staples focuses on the work “My Negro Problem-And Ours”. When quoting another man that has the same problem that he struggles with, Staples’ readers are given a clear sense that this is not an isolated case, and the sprinkle of logos given in an otherwise pathos-filled writing lends the circumstance needed to give the emotions real meaning. Because of this, the reader is allowed to focus on the idea that all of the examples given, even those from other sources, happen to an entire race of people, and not Staples alone. Having scope of the issue revealed as nationwide, rather than an issue following one person as the comic book-esque opening suggests, nearly leads the reader to an epiphany as their empathy is expanded, from a single person to a
Coker gives great evidence that supports racial injustice in the criminal justice system. She discusses on the Supreme Court’s rulings and accusations of racial preference in the system. This article is helpful because it supports my thesis on race playing a role on the system of criminal justice. Hurwitz, J., & Peffley, M. (1997). Public perceptions of race and crime: The role of racial stereotypes.
His sympathetic persona along with his analogies actively connect the reader to his story, while the strong diction and depressing tone make a strong emotional impact. Unlike most essays, the anti discrimination message can be applied to multiple minority groups and other social issues. As a whole, Brent Staples essay succeeds on all levels as it makes an impactful argument describing how society's view on African Americans as being dangerous violent criminals is truly
Synthesis Research Paper Everyday growing up as a young black male we have a target on our back. Society was set out for black males not to succeed in life. I would always hear my dad talk about how police in his younger days would roam around the town looking for people to arrest or get into an altercation with. As a young boy growing up I couldn’t believe some of the things he said was happening. However as I got older I would frequently hear about someone getting killed by the police force.
An occurrence observed by the population of Los Angeles, California conveys the existence of racism and police brutality. According to The Polls-Trends: Racial Differences in Attitudes Toward the Police, “…three quarters of blacks, but only 38 percent of whites, continued to view police brutality as a common occurrence” (Tuch and Weitzer
When they surveyed a group of women who have been sexually abused the percentage of them who used illegal substances was very high. In another study of both men and women who have all been abused in one way