In the paragraph above, Ray Bradbury showcased his craft and syntax. For example, he used numerous advanced vocabulary words such as cravat, hemp, interminably, and excruciate. Additionally, Ray Bradbury utilized a variety of compound adjectives in the description of Mr. Dark: sun-yellow, boar-bramble, clock-spring, ever-trembling, ever-glistening, tweed-thorns, moon-calm, and itch-weed. Furthermore, the use of compound adjectives provided a more vivid description within the paragraph. Moreover, Bradbury wrote sentences with varied construction and complexity. For example, he used commas to set apart appositive phrases. In the second sentence, Bradbury wrote, “His pale face, lunar pockmarks denting it, cast light” (Bradbury 73). In addition, he wrote multiple compound and complex sentences. Furthermore, commas in a series were used throughout the entire paragraph. In the passage, the fifth sentence contained commas in a series and was also a complex sentence. Creatively, the sentence length was varied as some sentences contained six words while others were made of over twenty words. Overall, the author’s craft was made evident by the syntax.
In Something Wicked This Way Comes, the author’s tone was dark. Ray
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As Jim and Will visited the carnival frequently throughout the book, most of the major events occurred at that location. For example, Jim and will were caught by Mr. Dark and Mr. Cooger, the evil carnival owners, while venturing near the out of order carousel. After climbing into a tree, they witnessed Mr. Cooger ride the carousel backwards and turn into a young boy. This moment was suspenseful to the reader as they realized that the carnival and its owners were evil and powerful. In addition, the reader was caused to feel anxious as they waited to find out what the next event would bring. As numerous other events had a similar impact on the reader, it was evident that the mood was
As the passage continues, Bradbury uses diction and imagery to emphasize the aura of this excerpt. Bradbury uses diction in the semantic field
He utilizes short sentences to illuminate his contemplations regarding a matter. For instance: "The land is presently secured with urban areas" (p.118). "I am a scrounger" (p.108). The creator, in select passages, progresses an instructive tone by organizing sentences to be more logical and an illustration can be found in section 30 on page 111. Eighner utilizes combined sentences to propel his tone and to give accentuation.
but then he lets all his emotions and ideas out to end vigorously and powerful. Banneker was successful through the use of some locutions like "guilty," "criminal," "cruel" and "oppression. " Utilizing these words most likely turned the way the reader was interpreting
With doing this, he showed the town people and the main character, getting caught up with themselves that they began to lose their sense of individuality. Ray Bradbury not only intents this message, but gives symbols through his characters in his
Capote uses this choice of words to establish a setting and paint a picture in the reader's mind of what Capote truly wants them to see and to expand on the grim and dismal mood that the readers feel throughout the entire passage. He uses many tone words like, slapped, pruned, stamped, cursing, and numbed as tone words to shift the mood of the reader to the depressing mood that Capote intends for the readers to feel and to help provide vivid imagery for the readers. These words are used to help Capote and help the readers understand what is happening in the passage with detail and with a unique perspective. In conclusion, Truman Capote effectively uses rhetorical devices such as metaphor, imagery, and diction to contribute to the shift from the third section of In Cold Blood to the fourth and final section and to pride a grim and dismal mood for the readers throughout this entire passage.
The emotions that readers read help them connect to the protagonist in a deeper sense. The syntax used by the changed
The use of imagery, metaphors, and similes were very apparent and were necessary for the tone of each chapter to distinguish between
Inside, Fahrenheit 451, Ray Bradbury practices a submissive, colloquial, and provocative tone as he writes. These varied tones offered demonstrate change in diction. A first claim is validating a difference in diction which stipulates a submissive tone. Montag is obedient while spotting the aircrafts that carry weapons.
The mood can even be described as ironic because a character's name is Fortunato which means fortunate, but instead he gets murdered. The key details and wording support and strengthen the mood. Furthermore, key details such as the way Montresor acts and wording that describes a scene support
Nicholas Craft AP Language and Composition Mrs. Fertenbaugh August 24 2015 Certainty is Key In this except from John M. Barry’s book The Great Influenza, the author discusses the challenges of science and the significance of certainty. In the field of science, certainty is important and it is necessary in order to advance. Being uncertain about something when it comes to science can cause a scientist to potentially miss out on an important discovery or fail to accomplish something. John M. Barry illustrates the importance of certainty with syntax, diction, and allegories.
It is important to understand that different tones are created to support different themes, as revealed through both Rowlandson’s and Erdrich’s texts. Through specific diction, an author can achieve a captivating tone which will support the message the author is trying to communicate. Words alone are powerful, as they hold immeasurable value and meaning capable of leaving a lasting
The style may seem very childish from the surface, but it is able to illustrate the theme of change and being stuck in between the innocence of childhood and the wiseness of adulthood in a very beautiful and poignant way. The poem “My Wicked Wicked Ways” had only three characters. The protagonist
The author writes in short choppy sentences to show Malcolm's lack of well sentence structure. The sentence structure is
Of all gothic writers, Edgar Allan Poe is one of the most groundbreaking of them all. From The Cask of Amontillado, a story with integrated historical references of the time, to The Fall of the House of Usher, a deep and morbid story full of imagery. Anywhere from The Tell-Tale Heart, truly a story of both unique syntax and perspective, to The Raven, a poem full of symbols and eerie repetition. Through these and many more, Poe has been using his writing style to immerse people into his stories and poems alike since 1839. However, Poe is only able to accomplish this through his unique writer’s style, particularly his forceful imagery and meaningful syntax.
“The deeper voice rolls over it, obliterates it. Like thunder rolling across the sky.” Joyce Carol Oates’ use of descriptive words, and the comparison to the thunder rolling across the sky, reveals Reid’s true power when he gets angry. This also helps the reader understand his controlling and angry personality. Statement #2 Element: Setting Why is this element particularly strong in the book you read? How does the author use it well?