Speech About Plastic Surgery

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First of all let me apologize for my late review. I was two weeks in Greece and couldn't find the time or motivation to write a proper review on vacation. Sorry! Now to the app: Her basics are all fine. I like her apparaence description and that you gave her some imperfections even though she's the visual of the group. Her aversion to makeup and that she already went under the knife and thinks about doing plastic surgery is nice and it's great that the ulzzang you choose has so many pictorial-esque pictures in her gallery. Her background with her time spend in Japan is also interesting and I like that you described her intial struggles with the language. Sooyoung's personality is really well-written. I especially like the first paragraph …show more content…

I'm a bit doubtful whether a company would actually push someone this tall as a visual since some guys would be rather intimnidated than attracted to such a beauty, but I guess it could work if they tweak her height on the profile a bit. And with this height she certainly has great proportions. Her aunt seems like such a stage mom (or should I say, stage aunt) for wanting her to be underweight and urging her to undergo plastic surgery. The whole paragraph really shows how competive the modeling industry is and I find her looks (especially the nose piercing) very interesting. Her background is amazing, I like it a lot. The way her aunt basically raised her, her starting to do photo shoots at age six, the description about building up a poker face – it's gripping but doesn't seem unrealistic or overdone. Her cooking hobby but not being able to eat the dishes and having to gift them to others makes me feel bad for her. I also like that she's not really talented musically, it gives Jineon just more reason to hate her. First I was a bit skeptical about the idea of her aunt forcing Starship to add Taerim to the line up despite their intial protests but as I thought more about it, I liked it more and more. Her aunt basically paying off the company for adding Taerim to the line-up all makes it just more

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