Nick Smith
Professor Rocha
Intro to College Writing
7 October 2017
Education vs. Intelligence Every contemporary society endures a division among the people, whether it’s because of social, financial, or political reasons. Mike Rose, the author of “Blue-Collar Brilliance,” is a professor at UCLA and an outspoken contributor on the topics of literacy. Furthermore, “Blue-Collar Brilliance” was published in a prestigious magazine, American Scholar, in 2009. As the storyline of the article revolves around the working American class, Rose writes it as a rebuttal to misconceptions that people who are on a higher social ladder hold. What Rose tries to convey in his article is that blue-collar jobs are much more complex than just its physical component.
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As a professor who specializes in literacy and learning, Rose applies his acquired knowledge to establish a high level of authority in his article. Rose explains how neither of his parents got a high level of education, and how he wasn’t inclined to excel in academics as well. But, Rose further elaborates about how he managed to succeed by saying, “I studied the humanities and later the social and psychological science…Then I went back to graduate school to study education and cognitive psychology and eventually became a faculty member in a school of education” (246-247). Rose acquired extensive knowledge throughout his academic years. His studies revolved around human behavior and psyche, which created the basis for analysis of his own family who endured a life of blue-collar community. Rose willingly exposes his childhood life as a way to express the complexity of such jobs, and to clarify that those jobs contain much more than just the physical aspects of it. Rose also attempts to demonstrate that coming from a blue-collar environment doesn’t necessarily place a boundary on success, and pursuit of greater …show more content…
Rose supports his views by saying, “To gain a sense of how knowledge and skill develop, I observed experts as well as novices. From the details of this close examination I tied to fashion what I called, ‘cognitive biographies’ of blue-collar workers,”(250). Rose effectively compares the various levels of labor as a part of his study to generate a better understanding of the complexity of blue-collar jobs. As a part of the comprehensive argument, Rose’s research reinforces his ability to delve deeper into the topic, and make connections between his experience and the educated conclusion that was derived from his study. Rose’s thesis, which revolves around the argument that blue-collar workers need to possess more abilities that go beyond the physical ability gains a greater credibility because it encompassed diverse stages of labor and related it to his personal experience. Rose recollected his observations to succinctly conclude that blue-collar jobs require advanced cognitive abilities alongside with physical attributes to successfully execute tasks. Rose uses examples of plumbers, hair stylists, and others to show some everyday situations these workers would have to know for example what tool to use and how. These jobs often use the judgment skills, mathematical, verbal, and other requirements they
Having never taken a college writing course before, I did not know what to expect and therefore assumed that I would choose my own topic to write about; of course, this isn’t the case. However, if I had the choice, I would not have chosen to write a response to Gerald Graff’s “Hidden Intellectualism”. After going through his essay with a fine-tooth comb, I have found a few flaws in his reasoning. Gerald Graff believes that schools and colleges are not taking advantage of “street smarts” by not using them in an intellectual setting when in fact, schools are providing students with a large assortment of other knowledge and skills. In Graff’s essay “Hidden Intellectualism”, he argues for the importance of changing school curriculums in order to better reflect the interests
Lost in the Meritocracy: The Undereducation of an Overachiever by Walter Kirn is the story of Kirn’s experiences throughout his education. Kirn is a boy from a small town in Minnesota who went on to graduate from Princeton and received the Keasbey scholarship to Oxford. One would think that he is an extremely educated man because of these schools that he attended, but he spends most of the novel discussing how he did not really learn, he just knew how to work the system. This book raises questions about the effectiveness of the American school system and shows why it is both successful and futile. Walter Kirn knows that he did not get into Princeton due to his intellectual abilities, but because he understood how to take multiple choice tests.
In “Hidden Intellectualism”, Gerald Graff argues the difference between “book smarts” (intellectualism) and “street smarts.” Graff explains that some people take on different approaches and interests certain subjects not related to “book smarts”, such as sports, television, fashion, etc. Everyone has a variation of both “book” and “street” smarts, but one is more profound than the other in a person, thus making the other a form of “hidden intellectualism”. He then claims that intellectualism in someone is often belittled and labeled as being geeky. As a kid, he was afraid to show his intellectual side in fear that he would be bullied and made fun of.
One of the most strived for things in life is academic excellence however the path to it is never easy. Author Thompson Ford’s article “How To Understand Acting White” outlines Stuart Bucks arguments about the irony of desegregation in education. A separate essay written by, Alfred Lubrano, “The Shock of Education: How College Corrupts” has similar ironies about the average college student. If Ford was to read Lubrano’s essay, Ford would come to a more complex conclusion by incorporating arguments and concepts from Lubrano’s essay. Ford may utilize Lubrano’s essay to expand on certain concepts such as the proximity effect, socioeconomics, and the level of education in top tier schools to further explain the “acting white” phenomenon from his own article.
In August 1963, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. delivered his famous ‘I Have A Dream’ speech to a racially mixed crowd of over 250,000 people (NY Times). In his speech, one line articulated the theme of the fourth wave especially for the African American elite. Dr. King stated, "We refuse to believe there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation." This quote embodied two of the most significant forces behind the shift between the third and fourth wave of the black elite: the Civil Rights Movement and dignity restored. After World War II, many blacks reached the tipping point of the inhumane rules of Jim Crow and began mobilizing to reject systemic oppression.
Blue Collar Experiences In the book “They Say, I Say”, one of the articles by Mike Rose talked about his mother in a restaurant, and how people can learn from their Blue Collar jobs. Mike Rose had said “Like anyone who is effective at physical work, my mother learned to work smart, as she put it, to make every move count.” This meant that Mike Rose’s mother had learned the causes and effects of what would happen if she didn’t deliver food fast enough or hadn’t sent in the right order. All of these things showed Rosie the correct way to be a waitress, and what it takes to have good customer service. Which she didn’t even have to attend college to learn effective customer service.
That just basically states that more skills are used at the blue collar job level than at the white collar job level. I think Mike Rose was successful in being persuasive when he wrote this. I think he was successful because he not only states the jobs that require extra learning in the essay but he uses his own connection. He put his mother in the essay and talks about her work life and he puts in his uncle’s work life and talks about his transition to a higher position and the problems he had.
While transitioning between his two tones in his reading, the author steps out of the main story to address the reader more directly in order to appeal to authority. He explains in a more detailed fashion why the students end up behaving so uninterestingly towards anything academic. This appeal is also logical in the sense of following the mind process of a student in a remedial class; from wanting to learn something new, to telling him or herself “Why bother?” and giving up on school. Rose presents his argument using all of the three classical appeals.
“Intelligence is closely associated with formal education- the type of schooling a person has, how much and how long- and most people seem to move comfortably from that notion to a belief that work requiring less schooling requires less intelligence” (Rose). What Rose is trying to infer is that just because you are labeled blue collar: meaning you have to earn your income from manual labor, and have lack of educational knowledge, does not mean you cannot earn the knowledge in your work career. There are many opportunities to learn from your job even if you are less experienced. “...One who is so intelligent about so many things in life seems unable to apply that intelligence to academic work.
In the story Noah count and the Arkansas ark by Gary Blackwood, the author demonstrates how the family in the text are poorly educated and how the boy thinks of his family. The boy in the story learned the lesson that even though his family members aren’t educated the way he is, doesn’t mean they aren’t smart. The boy’s views of his family change as the story develops. When the story begins, the boy thinks that his family isn’t very scientific. In the middle of the story, he Is embarrassed by them.
In the essay, “WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT ARE YOU DOING?”, written by Mark Edmundson states his claim on education. Edmunsdon states his claim on how if you want to get a real education in America you’re going to have to fight against the institution that you find yourself in. Edmundson supports his claim with the use of diction and tone, appealing to emotion and referring to personal experiences. With Edmundson’s support the reader is able to get a different outlook of how education is viewed and how to look past certain perceptions and make right decisions.
In "Blue-Collar Brilliance" Mike Rose Shares his perspective on how education is not Intelligence. He lets us know how growing up he was around a bunch of Blue-Collar workers himself, and how intelligence is not based on the education you have but what you can Develop on your own from just being open minded. He explains to use how blue-collar jobs take a toll on both body and mind. He believes that you don't need to be taught things to develop intelligence that your intelligence comes from within. He shared the different stories of blue-collar workers life that he experience such as his mother and his uncle to help us see that even if you don't have a high education and a college degree you can still become a successful.
He is a professor who specialized in literacy and learning. He also did a “study of the thought processes involved in work like that of his mother and uncle. I cataloged the cognitive demands of a range of blue-collar and service jobs, from waitressing and hair styling to plumbing and welding. To gain a sense of how knowledge and skill develop, I observed experts as well as novices. From the details of this close examination, I tried to fashion what I called “cognitive Biographies” of blue-collar workers.
In Derek Bok’s essay, “Preparing for a Career,” Bok challenges that idea that liberal arts and vocational training are world’s apart. Instead, he gives a different point of view that maybe the two fields of study are two sides of the same coin. While getting a professional education is important, job training is just as or even more so important. However, job training on its own has its drawbacks as well, so combining the two has merit. Philosophy, creative arts, humanities, etc.
Gerald Graff is a former English professor that examines the fallacies of academia in his essay “Hidden Intellectualism”. As the title suggest, Graff’s essay will depict how children are becoming intellectuals through the discussion of cars, sports, fashion, and TV. There is also discussion about how schools are overlooking this knowledge as being beneficial to a student’s success in academic writing and what they can do to relate the students previous understanding of extra-curricular activities to academia. My essay will examine the foundation of “Hidden Intellectualism” and the pros and cons of applying this to modern education systems. There is seldom an academic writing that is relatable and I am excited to read, but Graff executes this