If considering an article as a meal, after enjoying a good appetizer – the lead, it is expected that the main dish – the body will be as good as the appetizer to please diners. The body of an article is refered to the section that follows the lead. This is the information that the readers need to know. The main objective when writing the body is to get the reader to engage into the story and stimulate them to continue on reading until the end. It may be divided into smaller paragraphs. These paragraphs follow the ideas introduced by the lead, and give more information in the form of explanations, details and quotes. Both two articles give the reader much information about the sightings of creepy clowns, but what to notice on is the dictinctive ways of using quotation …show more content…
To indicate their points, an ingenious mixture between direct and indirect quotations is used. This helps to ease the readers’ eye for being overstuffed by full and direct quotations.
Supt David Duncan of Police Scotland said the force had received “a few sporadic reports of individuals dressed as clowns in some areas”. He reiterated that many incidents reported on social media had been confirmed as hoaxes and emanate from overseas. (Indirect) “I was walking home and saw a figure walking towards me; it was dark so I didn’t think about it. When the person got closer I noticed he was in a clown costume head to toe, and had a mask on. Being terrified of clowns I turned around and ran for what I thought was my life. I was screaming and shouting for help but no one was around, I was chased for about 20-30 seconds.” (Direct)
In The Sun, the quotations are less, only 5 compare to 9. Additionally, The Sun’s quotations are much briefer and easier to read than The Guardian’s ones.
“Hey, guys, time to cool the clown hysteria–most of em are good, cheer up the kiddies, make people
By using a quote coming from a businessman and former journalist who might know more what they’re talking about, rather than a random citizen weighing in on the matter, makes readers take a closer look at what Ho Kwon Ping (businessman and former journalist) has to say about this
Murray sets aside a paragraph for each component that writers look for in their drafts, "information", "meaning", "audience", "form", "structure", "development", "dimension", and "voice" (228-229). Each paragraph is brief, only covering the basics of the subject, but serve the greater purpose of being unnecessary. Murray deliberately makes this portion inconsequential in order to illustrate the importance of editing. Immediately afterward, Murray's words become interesting and involved, telling you only what you need to know. As Murray puts it, "Each sentence, each line, each clause, each phrase, each word, each mark of punctuation, each section of white space between the type has to contribute to the clarification of meaning."
One is at the third paragraph, when author crossed in front of cars, drivers hammering down the door locks. One is that author was mistaken for a burglar in the office of a magazine. "The youngish black man - a broad six feet two inches with a beard...seemed menacingly close." is a vivd personal description about naming and detailing. In the second paragraph, "That was more than a decade ago," is a time coherence.
“ I scrambled back up. I left my bike there, it’s wheels spinning, and ran for home. I ran in absolute terror, listening for the sound of the car squealing back around to come after me again. I burst through the front door, crying hysterically. My goggles were twisted back around my head.
An example of the author using indirect characterization is when Hassan is being attacked following the kite-fighting tournament, Amir doesn't take any action to help him because all he is thinking about is the kite, calling it, "my key
In one occasion, he recounts strolling along a street at night and hearing the "click-clack of high heels" as a white woman swiftly crossed the street to escape him (Staples, 1986). The reader feels a sense of shared experience with the author as a result of the image's immediate invocation of sentiments of terror and dread. Staples achieves unity and coherence by his use of vivid and precise descriptions that take the reader into his experiences. In one occasion, he recounts strolling along a street at night and hearing the "click-clack of high heels" as a white woman swiftly crossed the street to escape him (Staples, 1986). The reader feels a sense of shared experience with the author as a result of the image's immediate invocation of sentiments of terror and
It also implies to the reader that Heath spent extra time crafting a powerful article using logos, which demonstrates the author's passion for the advantages of funny animal videos. Using both of these strategies of rhetorical appeals complements each other in creating a more powerful
Main Idea of Body Paragraphs:Introduce 3 characters Mitty Blake, Yetta, and Todd Beamer display many character traits in their specific novels that send them into action. A particular trait emerges out overhead all the others. CLAIM Statement: Of all the character traits, bravery most influences
The author then builds scene through description "… in a Tudor building..." and "noticed a man at the far end of the lot, near a seven-story apartment building" creating a sense of being there. The author then uses quotes from the victim to show just how much was heard by the bystanders nearby. The author also creates a sense of an animalistic attack by the assailant. An example of such description is " the assailant looked up at him, shrugged and walked down Austin street. The author then describes the assailant as the everyday person he was, being a family man and having no former crimes.
While the number of sentences in a paragraph varies – sometimes six, sometimes ten, sometimes more – their length changes to give the essay an almost musical rhythm. Even in the longer sentences the mind’s eyes is tickled by Parker’s constant use of figurative language, humor, description chock-full of metaphors and adjectives, and allusions to the biblical, the supernatural, and the historical (especially so in paragraph five). All of these elements work in tandem to slowly but surely illustrate and finally reach Parker’s point as they hold an audience member’s attention and give him a way to slip in facts and citations without boring the
Such wording invokes curiosity in the reader, making the author’s argument more
Second paragraph has less flow, more straight to the point and realistic. Thesis- Through the use of imagery, metaphors, and other literary devices, the authors portrays the Buchannan’s estate as one of tranquility, elegance, and order, which is in direct contrast to the abrasive, noisy, harsh character of the landowner, Tom
In the excerpt from The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time, rhetorical devices such as appeal to pathos, imagery, and simile helped create suspense when Christopher had found out about his undead mother. By creating suspense, it gives the reader a certain feeling of wanting to read more to figure out what would happen next. The author appeals to pathos by announcing Christopher’s undead mother. As Christopher had said, “Mother had not had a heart attack.
(ll. 27-28, p. 142). In this example, Holly’s position is exclusively described, however, it can be concluded that she feels small and uncomfortable. The use of ‘show, don’t tell’ makes the text more difficult to read, as it requires the reader’s own interpretations to gain an understanding of the described events and experiences. Additionally, everyday language is used in dialogue, which is illustrated in the following passage: “”Holly,” I go. “It’s true, Duane,” she goes.