Pros And Cons Of Online Shopping Essay

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The argument that I am going to be addressing in my persuasive essay is how people should shop in stores more instead of online. I am arguing this because some people do not realize the impact it causes on retail stores, their employees and themselves. My argument is derived from my current field, retail. Shopping online has become a huge problem even within my company. Stores have been closing due to more online ordering instead of in-store shopping. While some people online shop it allows them to buy things that they end up regretting and wasting later on. Online shopping also does not allow there to be as much social interaction which can cause health problems.
One of my key points is the fact that people are losing their jobs due to stores closing and becoming more of an online store. Another one of my key points is that when people online shop they are more likely to regret their decisions. They end up buying more than they need or buy things they do not need. Lastly, shopping in-store allows you to have social interaction, which is healthy, rather than sitting on your mobile device or computer and online shopping. These key points support my main argument due to the fact that they all argue that shopping in-store rather than online is better for everyone overall. I feel that showing that there is something good in it for everyone …show more content…

I hope to bring the effects of online shopping to their attention so they are able to see where I, a retail employee, is coming from. This essay will need many things to be successful. The first thing that I have acknowledged that it will need is for me to show that I understand their side of the argument because I too agree with some of it. I have to make my key points very clear and straight to the point so it is easy to understand. I feel that if it is easy to under people will understand my side of the argument

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