The Importance Of Social Personalism

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According to the Social Personality Expert Social concern is our interest or interest in helping others. Our immediate environment has great influence in determining our level of social concern. In order for us not to be numb with social concern, we must be diligent in sharpening our social concerns. The trick can diligently attend social service events. One to note is the pity definition. Sometimes we often say that pity is a misnomer of social concern. Thought is wrong because social concern is not just limited to thinking or feeling, social care is an action. The introductory paragraph tells the reader that the surrounding environment has a major impact on social concerns. The third sentence leads to the fourth sentence thesis question. The thesis statement …show more content…

Note that in the second paragraph "feelings" and "thoughts" come first. The first sentence also covers the topics for this paragraph. The last sentence using the words "free of envy" is the transition hook for the last paragraph. Social awareness is an important value that must be owned by someone because it is associated with the value of honesty, compassion, humility, hospitality, kindness, avoid the envy and so forth. To have the attitude of social care is needed a certain level of maturity. It is difficult to educate children about social concerns, but that does not mean they do not need to learn. Slowly children will understand about the importance of caring attitude towards others from an early age. At first glance the fourth paragraph (the third paragraph in the body), "avoid the envy" is used to connect to the previous paragraph. This first sentence also tells the reader that this paragraph will address the important values of social concerns discussed. The last Kaliamat uses the words "the importance of caring attitude" linked to the last

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