Staci Alfaro
Expository Writing 101
Rough Draft # 2
Catherine Kupiec
25 September 2014
Finding Your Way through Situations Society has always stated to have faith in justice and equality to all. In Susan Faludi’s short story “The Naked Citadel,” she discovers the central problems with sexuality among an all-male military academy. This masculine mindset is challenged by Shannon Faulkner who applied to and was granted access to the academy. However, she did not mark her gender declaring whether she was female, which in turn led to a very notorious court case. Dr. Leslie bell is a sociologist and psychotherapist, who is an expert in women’s development and sexuality. She is also the author of Hard to Get: Twenty-Something Women and the Paradox
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The cadets at the Citadel “envision its military tradition above all (Faludi 79).” The cadets will always have to obey whatever the school said, no matter what it was. That was the tradition and that is what the school had envisioned. The cadets did not have an option to try and break free from this mold because that would be breaking tradition. It was something that could not be done. Equally, Alicia did not want to fall into the traditional mold of having a teen pregnancy. Using the good-girl strategy to solve this problem, lead her to her problems. She simply felt unsure and insecure. “Alicia’s rebellion was to succeed academically and to be different from her family. In some ways Alicia’s family molded her into being a good girl as noted, she was raised Catholic, and her father [forbade] her from dating in high school (Bell 37).” Her whole life Alicia was trying to fit into this mold her family had implanted her since her childhood. There was no way of escaping it. Instead of facing reality of her desires and what she wanted to do, the truth was Alicia was not ready to do any of it. Instead the right thing to do was try and fit into this traditional mold. In the long run she tried this good-girl rebel, which in the end resulted with nothing good. The cadets and Alicia only options were to fit into this frame that their family and society had presented them with. If they had tried to evade this then there would’ve been consequences. It was imply easier to fall into the mold and be one of the rest. Making society and their families happy but never truly facing the realities of the real world they lived
All of the Cadets come into the Citadel with different unique personalities and identities, but when they come to the Citadel, they put all of those to the side. When becoming a “Whole Man” at the Citadel the Cadets clear all differences and possess one identity, a masculine, tough, man. A Cadet states, “it’s like we’re all one, we’re all the same, and-I don’t know- you feel like you’re exposed, but you feel safe”(75). Even though each person is different, they are in the same place doing the same thing which connects them on another level.
In “The End of the Women’s college?” by Brian Burton, Burton engages the reader by positioning his thesis, “[a]s women continue to advance in society and the detrimental effects of gender discrimination continue to fade, women’s colleges will continue to decline in number and in purpose” (1). Burton’s thesis conveys the reader, believing that the decline in same-sex institutions for women will decrease for a good cause; therefore, it will provide better opportunities and exclude gender discrimination. Burton asserts his beliefs by defending them with past statistics and then correlates them with the present. “In the 1960s and 1970s, a combination of social changes, legislative decisions, and increased demand for higher education among baby
Sex and gender have always been an intricate topic. Both appear within society on a spectrum, not binary opposites. In Colonial times, such a belief would be nonexistent in a culture that places a tremendous weight on an individual’s sex and gender. Despite such beliefs individuals still identified outside the binary; for example, the case of Thomasine/Thomas Hall. When historians attempt to study cases like the one, it can be difficult to reconcile the court's decision with how the individual identified themselves.
Coming Out Under Fire: The History of Gay Men and Women in World War II is an example of how the lives of gay and lesbian service members were during the time when gay life was thwarted. The author of this piece, Alan Berube, tells the ugly story of American institutional life during and after World War II. Berube also documents the courage, self-respect, and ingenuity of gay GIs that enabled them to live their lives the best they could in the situations they faced. Berube points out the fact that even though the military tried their best to completely eradicate gays from the military, what actually happened was the extreme opposite. A gay subculture actually formed and thrived under the watchful eye of Uncle Sam.
To understand the linkage between sexuality and gender, it is important to reimagine the relationship between sexuality and gender and the rapport they hold with self-identification. Not long ago, sexuality was tied to procreation - becoming the core of one’s identity. Gender had always been tied to biological sex. However, a crisis of gender identity emerged and blurred the gender and sexuality binaries that had become commonplace social facts. A fluidity was created that allowed individuals to not feel the pressure of fitting inside distinct identification categories.
She faces many mental dilemmas while this incident weighs down on her. She begins to constantly ask herself what the difference between white and black people are. This boosts her want to join the NAACP, which leads into the college phase of her
In high school, the pressure to fit in with the crowd often overshadows the need for individuality; however, the protagonist in “Initiation” discovers that staying true to herself is what would make her happier when given the option to join a high school sorority, and this is seen as the theme of the story. As Millicent goes through the initiation process, she learns about the strength of herself by completing the tasks, her ability to connect with different people and her need for originality. For instance, her sister Beverly ordered her around and was generally rude to her, yet Millicent continued to follow her commands although, “rebellion flooded through her.” Furthermore, the task assigned to her of going around a bus and asking strangers
As a result, it leads her to fight for her own life in order to survive in the 1800’s. Through Dana’s experience, it helps readers understand, and realize that slavery was not an easy time in our country’s history and demonstrates
Within any particular system, there is present an underlying motive for success in every sense of the word. While in some scenarios, that motive can be hidden beneath the desire to fit in, above all this, the idea of prosperity is the main factor in motivating individuals toward their goals. Susan Faludi, the author of “The Naked Citadel”, explores how at the all-boys college, students are pressured into conforming to the “Whole Man” standard where they develop brotherhood, a sense of structure, and belonging. When these men are able to develop such strong bonds with one another, several flaws come about. The majors issues at The Citadel, lie in their denial of women into the school, and the traumatic hazing new students endure.
In Jamaica Kincaid’s short story “Girl,” the narration style of a mother lecturing her daughter with sharp, commanding diction and unusual syntax affects the evolution of a scornful tone regarding the daughter’s behavior which will eventually lead her to a life of promiscuity that will change the way people perceive and respect her within her social circle. It also emphasizes expectations for young women to conform to a feminine ideal of domesticity as a social norm during this time and emphasizes the dangers of female sexuality. The narration of the mother lecturing her daughter with forceful diction contributes to the theme of women conforming to domesticity and the warning that if they do not conform, then they will lead a life of promiscuity
At the Citadel, female students are frowned upon because their attendance breaks the old tradition of being a male-only institution but there are female presence around the campus. The Citadel “was by no means free of women. Female teachers were improving cadets’ minds, female administrators were keeping their records, and an all-female (and all-black) staff served the meals in the mess hall” (Faludi 74). Faludi talks about female staff at the Citadel to show that the campus is not really “male-only” because there are females around.
Who are you? Do you define yourself as man or woman? How do you know? Born biologically male/female, do you know how to behave in a masculine/feminine way? Of course you do!
Many critics agree on one fact about Canadian author Alice Munro: one of her most notable qualities in regards to her work is the distinct use of realism in her writing. Her writing provides a strong sense of familiarity to the reader, while also containing stronger metaphorical meanings that one can note when they begin to closely look at her work. Her short story “Boys and Girls” portrays the socialization of a young girl, once very close to her father and unaware of any sort of gender bias within her society, into a young woman with a pessimistic view of femininity and her expected position in society. This story shows the socialization process in a way that makes it easy to recognize, illustrating circumstances that the reader can notice the blatant sexism and misogyny; however, its portrayal is extremely realistic, allowing the reader to recall how oblivious they may have been in the past during times that they have been impacted by social biases in our world. Critics of Munro typically agree on her overall theme of femininity and coming of age in her writings; “Boys and Girls” emphasizes the ways in which young girls are socialized into a seemingly natural understanding of the sexist expectations and gender roles.
The poem “The Naked and the Nude” was written by Robert Graves as a responds to an article with the exact same name written in 1910 by Walter Sickert. Robert Graves as written this poem in such a way that the form looks straight forward and simple as he only has four stanzas, six lines in each, with the rhyme scheme of A,A,B,B,C,C. He uses many literary devices, some of which are allusion, alliteration, assonance and personification. Robert Graves also wrote this poem with a connotation and denotation purpose. The denotation purpose was to distinguish the naked from the nude.
Lucy Friebert says that changing the power dynamic to be sexist is making a “woman’s biology her destiny” and “exposes the complicity of women