Benjamin Franklin's speech was effective and ineffective, and at the same time, his speech may confuse you. I have came out with 3 positives and 2 negatives . If you want to know what they are, continue reading. There are many ways this speech is effective. One way it was effective is that Benjamin Franklin was willing to change his opinions for the better of the people. “ I confess that I do not entirely approve of this constitution at present ; but , sir , I am not sure I shall never approve of it , for , having lived long , I have experienced many instances of being obliged , by better information or fuller consideration , to change opinions even on important subjects , which I once thought right , but found to be otherwise. …show more content…
Benjamin Franklin wanted a powerful government . He wanted the constitution to be like the Babels, high and successful . This was good because if they were strong and powerful , they couldn’t be taken down and they could come up with bigger and better ideas that could benefit them in many ways. This is also a bad thing because they could have too much power and take it to their head . They would not listen to anyone and they would make decisions that no one really approves of and they could end up failing . This speech is also not effective to me because his speech was hard to understand and it did not keep my attention. It was not direct to the point and it didn’t use a typical everyday vocabulary an 8th grader would use . But, if I were an older person I would maybe, reconsider saying it was too hard to understand . Another negative about his speech was that many people weren’t coming together to make the constitution better . They were just focusing on themselves . In conclusion , even Benjamin Franklin himself has inefficient and efficient things in his speech .What positive and negatives can you think of from his speech ? Over all his speech was well written but, hard to
Benjamin franklin's involvement with the us constitution is a very remarkable part of the us constitution because of how much he inspired the delegates to work on the constitution Of all the founding fathers, Franklin has the special distinction of having signed all three of the major documents that gave the colonies freedom from British rule and established the United States as a free nation(1): the Declaration of Independence, The Treaty of Paris, and the United States Constitution were all the treaties he signed(1). Benjamin franklin didn’t use any documents to help him write the us constitution. But since his beginning times, he’d read many important books. He’d discussed vision about equal rights with professors and other delegates. He’d also worked with intelligent men like
The Revolutionary Figure that I picked for my essay is Benjamin Franklin. Benjamin Franklin was born January 17, 1706 in Boston, Massachusetts. He was the tenth son of seventeen of a man who made soap and candles. In his early life at the age of twelve he became an apprentice to his brother who was a printer.
Benjamin Franklin was an important figure in the history of the United States and
He used effective reasons and ways which makes this speech one of the
Franklin said there would be more violence (pre-war.) Henry tried to fire up all the representatives. Franklin tried to get all the anti-federalists to agree with the Constitution. In
Benjamin Franklin and Patrick Henry were two important people in American History who made a difference. Franklin’s “Speech in the Convention and Henry’s “Speech in the Virginia Convention” helped guide our nation to independence and democracy. Both speeches have good examples of rhetorical devices, but I think Patrick Henry speech ‘Speech in the Virginia Convention” has better rhetorical devices. Some examples are rhetorical question, logos, diction, and imagery. Patrick Henry style and content is more effective then Benjamin Franklin because Patrick uses a plethora of things such as imagery, “There is no retreat but in submission and slavery!
“Words can inspire, and words can destroy. Choose yours well.” - Robin Sharma. In 1787, a convention was held to determine the efficiency of a debatable Constitution discussed by the delegates. Benjamin Franklin, having represented Pennsylvania, then presented a speech regarding his position on the topic, declaring his agreement to it in spite of his uncertainty on whether or not it will result in negative consequences in the future.
Although Franklin makes a point to say this experiment is about him, he also writes that “it may be well my posterity should be informed…” (Franklin 433). Franklin is writing this with the intent of others seeing his argument. He makes a clear point that this is the direction a perfect man should be heading towards.
Benjamin Franklin was a great man that had influences in many areas and because of that he had many enemies but because he understood human behavior he enabled himself to turn enemies into allies. To understand the Benjamin Franklin effect you need to know that the things you do often create the things you believe. An example is when “Franklin ran for his second term as a clerk, one of his colleagues delivered a long speech to the legislature lambasting Franklin. Franklin still won his second term, but this guy truly pissed him off. So he set out to turn his hater into a fan, but he wanted to do it without paying any servile respect to him.
He talks about things from the “establishment, that which [he] first formed, called the Union Fire Company” (Franklin 82) which was a big deal back then to inventing a new fireplace. He writes about his good deeds because Franklin wants to show what good Americans can do. His son would probably not have care as much, but the general public would care how Americans can prosper. Part three is all about how he prospered, how he lived the ‘American Dream’ Some believe that Benjamin Franklin wrote about his good deeds because he wanted to show Great Britain how great America was. He wanted to show that they could grow and prosper, that the Americans do not need Great Britain to survive, that they are fine by themselves, maybe ever
To me, his use of pauses really set the mood and was the most effective for making his point serious. He was well spoken but not word heavy. We can learn to follow similar techniques if are ever in position to speak to the nation and declare war with another country; or for giving a speech to on a smaller level like a classroom presentation. Thank you
Franklin claims that he has been living long enough to see errors that he made, therefore as he grow older, he tend to “doubt of [his] own judgment” because nobody is perfect due to his past experiences (43). The informations that Franklin presents is to show his reputation that he is not perfect, also his constitution but he is open minded and willing to make what is best for the people. The perspective errors of the constitution have, is being “sacrificed to the public good” meaning all the flaw that constitution have will not be reveal to the people (44). Franklin is very passion about what is best for the people and their happiness, furthermore his characteristic is very respectful toward the citizen and the congress.
The importance of Ben Franklin has been told all throughout history, along with the famous $100 bill with his face on it. Drafting the Declaration of Independence, foudning universities and libraries, the post office, shaping policies in the U.S., publishing newspapers, making advances in science, and letting us use bifocals and using lighting for electricity. Even if this man never finished school, he did much reading and experiments that help us out today. The reason why I chose to write about Benjamin Franklin was because he was a very important Founding Father and it’s important for people to learn all about
Franklin made it a huge part of his life to continue bettering his education and himself. Due to Franklins determination, he became a very successful politician along with so much more. Lastly, religion was another large part of Franklin’s book, he speaks thoroughly about his thoughts on different religions and his search for what he truly believed in. Despite leaving his religious group and stating that he doubted the Revelation he still stated that he had respect for other religious groups and supported the
In his speech, he says “Within these walls, they were born, and here they shall die”. Franklin uses persuasive techniques, like parallelism, to make his ideas reach the minds of the delegates at the convention. Another example of parallelism would be when he states “..you assemble with those men, all their prejudices, their passion, their error of opinion, their local interests, and their selfish views”. The use of parallelism increases the significance of the weaknesses of the Consitution never being expressed outside the walls in which it was