Waste Charging In Hong Kong Essay

1. Is the topic that the writer has chosen manageable in an essay of this length? Can it be more focused?

Ans: The topic chosen by my classmates is “Should Waste Charging be Adopted in Hong Kong?”. In my opinion, waste charging in Hong Kong has been a controversial issue and discussed incessantly among citizens within these years. There are sufficient resources in different databases and news articles for the writer to make a reference or use as evidence to prove the thesis. An in-depth analysis can be carried out on this topic through different aspects such as economic, social and environmental in an appropriate length. Therefore, the topic is definitely not difficult to be managed.

In addition, the topic need not to be more focused. Excessive waste is an urgent predicament that every country has to faced, almost all of them have to discuss whether waste charging is a suitable and feasible solution. If the scope of the essay is set worldwide, there would be a long list of things to discuss and conclusion will be hard

Be as specific as possible and insert comments into your classmate’s document.

11. List two major areas of improvement your classmate should consider for the Final Draft. Be as specific as possible and insert comments into your classmate’s document. (For example, you may want to insert something like “your thesis statement is unclear” next to your peer’s thesis statement. Or, you may say something along the lines of “your pro-arguments 2 and 3 are very similar.”)

Ans: First, there is no explanation for the counter argument stated in the essay. My classmate only raised the counter argument in simply one sentence without any further elaboration and examples. He should explain why some people would think Hong Kong people would not worry about the charge after the adoption of waste charging scheme and examples of other countries can be provided as well in order to make the counter argument more complete and controversial enough to be