I wanted to contact you with some of my thoughts on the novel you and David Levithan wrote together Will Grayson, will grayson. In this letter I want to talk about three main things; How Will develops as a person throughout the novel, how I thought you wrote the novel, and what things I thought would make it better.
First, I wanted to tell you my thoughts on how you developed Will and his character throughout the novel. The way you developed both of the Will characters I thought was done marvelously, and I think you and David did not deviate from the confusion within Wills’ head with Jane, and in the other Will’s head when struggling with his depression through his online relationship with Isaac. I also really appreciated the thought you put
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I first just wanted to compliment the complex layers of craftsmanship on top of each other in your writing. I really enjoy how you write because it gives key details that the reader needs to know along with humor and relatable engaging text to keep the reader on their toes. I thought when you were writing from the perspectives of both of the Wills’ that you kept their stories intermingled while still keeping them two separate stories. I think the best way I can describe it is that you captivate whoever you are writing for by having relatable real world perspectives for teenagers like myself to relate to. I also wanted to touch on what I thought made the writing exceptional. I just think throughout the whole book so far the character portrayal is flawless and the plot is progressing really well and all of the inklings you insert throughout the novel to Will finding his true self is awesome and really adds a whole new dynamic to the literature. I really liked when they were thinking about the school musical and while Will is trying to get Tiny into shape to practice Jade takes him aside and he said, “Damned if I talk, damned if I don’t.” (Green & Levithan 160) I thought this quote really showed how Will felt trapped when dealing with Tiny and his problems, and I think you wrote that section perfectly to indicate how Will is dealing with Tiny’s emotions
The way that Michael Shaara has written this novel shows how truly wonderful he was as an entertaining writer. There was one thing that I did not like about it and that was the pace. I would have liked if the author would have written before the date of June 29th, and explained a little more of what was happening. Another little critique I would make would be to not drag on the days so intensely.
I did not have many complaints. Even though, at times, I may have felt there was information or conversations that were not entirely needed, it did add more depth to the book and allowed the reader to see more into each individual
My thoughts on the book are a bit cloudy, I'm not sure what to think, I don't like nor do I dislike it. It's just not my kind of book and it didn't really catch me as a reader, but I
Second it was a very good book. It was good mainly because it makes you like the characters more and more over time so when they die it makes you sad and it puts a lot of emotion into the book. That is good because a lot of books don 't have that. Those
This book was absolutely phenomenal. The quirky characters and the close relationships they had with each other pull in the reader. It uses suspense to keep the reader constantly guessing what will happen next. In this book Chris Crutcher confronts many mature themes such as mental illness, racism, suicide, and death, while still being able to keep the book light hearted in many places.
I think that the author did a great job using the first page to show the reader what is going on in the book, and to read on to find out what will happen next in the book. A way that he didn’t introduce well is the characters. He did not explain in detail what the characters look like, or how they act, or how they deal with conflict and other things. Like on page 1 where he
I went and read several other reviews on this story and the majority said that they loved this book. And another can be also added to that list, myself. I absolutely fell in love with this book. After getting a couple of chapters in, the story really started to pull me in. I would look at the clock and realize that I had been reading for over an hour when it felt like I had been reading for twenty minutes.
The plot, the setting, the characters were all wonderful, but the three things that caught my attention were the accuracy of events, heart-racing events, and the plot. Throughout the book, events during the jail or courthouse were described very detailed and produced a clear image in my head. The author must have done lots of prior research in order to get information about these events that most commoners do not know. The fire, rape, fights were described in a manner that allowed me to truly experience and understand what it was like in the character’s shoes. The plot went through many situations from jail cells all the way to getting confidential information from the Pentagon.
What I didn’t really like about it, was the lack of development for their relationship. To me, it seemed that she hated his guts, then boom! He says he is able to break her mother’s curse which makes her already attracted to him. I believe the author could’ve had the two slowly open up to each other, and maybe include a few awkward moments that shows the development of their love for each other. Despite the minor setback, I could not contain my excitement and muffled my squeals with a pillow.
Another strong point was how well Kidd developed the characters. It was hard not to feel a sort of attachment to the characters and feel what they were going through as they came to life throughout the story. A shortcoming of the book was that I believe there was too much time spent on non-important events. A large chunk of the novel was spent on Sarah Grimke’s childhood and her love life, which weren’t necessary components of the book. The last section of the book talking about Sarah and Angelina’s journey speaking about abolition and women's rights was very vague while it was perhaps the most important part of the characters lives and of
I think this book is very creative, because of the way the book is written and how the emotions
Overall the book is fairly slow, slightly good plot, and several underdeveloped
Another thing I really liked was the way they made the family characters of mom, dad, and Scott. But my favorite thing was the way that they developed Nick’s basketball skill throughout the story. There is a part in the story where somebody is shot by Zack (Trent’s brother) and Trent has to decide if he’s gonna go into running with him or stay for the big championship game with Nick. So I really enjoyed that part because it combined how much I like basketball and the excitement of whether or not Trent would stay or go. In the book it has dad only caring about Nick as much when he was a good basketball player, so I thought it was cool how they sort of betrayed him as a bad guy.
There were a lot of themes that I picked up. Kit was a very brave and courageous character and everyone had a lot of loyalty. In conclusion, I would recommend this book. I thought it was pretty
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