In the infamous prose “Attention Whole Foods Shoppers” Robert Paarlberg, a Harvard international affairs expert divulges on the ongoing warfare with the issue of sustainability. Paarlberg focuses on how the rise in global starvation increases in less developed nations, but it is often ignored by those in developed countries because of their fixation with the green revolution. He asserts many claims as to why Africa and Asia still have high food deprivation rates, which quite contrary to popular belief has nothing to do with overpopulation. This stems from lack of investment into agricultural infrastructure and investments. His criticism of whole foods shoppers seeks to bring awareness to the issue of world hunger and how the quest to eat organically …show more content…
The long sentences he served the purpose of making his piece more informative. The less ambiguity, the more persuasive your essay will be. An example of the author using a long sentence to be informative is presented below. “And Africa? Africa has a relatively equitable and secure distribution of land, making it more like Asia than Latin America and increasing the chances that improvements in farm technology will help the poor, if Africa were to put greater resources into farm technology, irrigation, and rural roads, small farmers would benefit” (614). Long sentences, as seen above tend to be detailed. He successfully proposed that Africa has a grand distribution of land but he didn’t stop there. He continued to expound on that thought by offering the importance of that land in the same sentence. This elongated sentence reduces the possibility of questions arising from his statement about Africa having “relatively equitable “land. The details and descriptiveness of this sentence allowed readers to correctly deduce his main point, which made him more persuasive. As good writer, would, Paarlberg used a combination of short and long sentences to make his piece more effective. Long and short sentences are a part of
In the first draft the author jumps right to the thesis statement and the publisher’s purpose. He does not have a clear introduction because it was missing an attention getter. The author started talking what the essay was going to be about, and for me it was just like the author didn’t want to spend more time working on the introduction. The author had some problems with sentence structure, moreover, I think that the author wanted to be more specific about what he/ she was talking about that sometimes he/she confused himself.
In his essay,“Simplicity,” author, William Zinsser reveals a solution to cluttered writing and provides examples as to how “clutter” is detrimental to both the writer and his audience. Zinsser suggests that writers strip their writing down to its “cleanest components” to avoid confusing or losing the interest of their readers. He adopts an instructive tone to aid students and writers on how to eliminate verbose language. In paragraph two, William uses a series of rhetorical questions in order to reel in active readers and contemplate about their ideas as well as connect them back to his own. He begins the paragraph with three rhetorical questions: “Who can understand the viscous language…?”
Jonathan Bloom authored a book about food waste in America called, American Wasteland. Bloom describes societal norms and values that contribute to food waste. Bloom is successful in getting his message across by effectively using phrases such as “food insecurity”, “cultural waste”, and “cultural shift” to highlight the severity of the issue, challenge societal norms, and encourage readers to act. Bloom uses the phrase “food insecurity” to describe the lack of access to enough food for an active and healthy life for some Americans.
Rhetorical Analysis of “Attention Whole Foods Shoppers” In “Attention Whole Foods Shoppers” by Robert Paarlberg, the main emphasis in the article is that there is a struggle to feed people, particularly in South Africa and Asia due to economic and population issues. His focus is on the lack of involvement of countries around the world that do have food. Throughout the article, Paarlberg talks about how organic agriculture is not going to feed the world and exposes myths about organic food and industrial scale food.
My family frequently shops in farmer’s markets, although we do not focus on purchasing only local produce. This reflects the way that our financial privilege has shaped my family’s and my community’s environmental consciousness: our avenues of environmental activism are those that are generally only available to those with financial privilege. In her book about pesticide drift, Jill Harrison discusses the organic food movement. She explains that the
This sentence style shows the author’s thinking process at the moment, rather than tells a story. Besides fragmented sentences, sections are also unchronological and seem irrelative to each other, attracting readers to read
In chapter 8, Graff talks about the strategies to connect each part of essay to create a complete expression. He emphasizes that connecting between sentences and sentences or phrases and phrases is important because it helps the readers clearly and obviously understand the writer’s thinking process, then obtain the writer’s purpose of writing. To create the connection, Graff mentions four strategies, containing to use transition word, to use pointing words, to repeat key team and phrase, and to repeat writer’s ideas in different methods. Chapter 9 is about properly transform formal and unformal writing style in the academic writing. Graff first confirms the importance in using formal language, vocabulary in academic writing.
Since the conception of modern medicine in the dark ages, the human population has grown exponentially. Ironically enough the agricultural farming techniques have not grown at such a fast rate, leaving more than a billion of our fellow humans to starve. This semester I explored the topic of hunger and some sustainable options we could use to loosen its grip on the ‘bottom billion.’ Growing up in a community that was very conscious of our environmental impact, I find myself drawn to talk about the environmental problems we are currently facing. This interest lead me to open the Despommier article called, ‘The Rise of Vertical Farming.’
It is necessary that President Obama extensively describes examples because the reader will understand better. And if the reader comprehends more of the passage, then the speech will be successful. Also, elaborating more on a specific point strengthens Obama's arguments. In general, the use of distinctio allows the reader to understand a greater portion of Obama’s speech.
In the world, there are one billion people undernourished and one and a half billion more people overweight. In this day and age, where food has become a means of profit rather than a means of keeping people thriving and healthy, Raj Patel took it upon himself to explore why our world has become the home of these two opposite extremes: the stuffed and the starved. He does so by travelling the world and investigating the mess that was created by the big men (corporate food companies) when they took power away from the little men (farmers and farm workers) in order to provide for everyone else (the consumers) as conveniently and profitably as possible. In his book Stuffed and Starved: The Hidden Battle for the World Food System, Patel reveals his findings and tries to reach out to people not just as readers, but also as consumers, in hopes of regaining control over the one thing that has brought us all down: the world food system.
To understand how bread reflects an individuals relationship to the global food system, Bobrow-Strain structures his book by providing numerous dreams that pertain to bread and the consequences that these dreams have on consumer demands. The chapters explore dreams such as, purity, cognation, control, abundance, health, strength, peace, resistance and status. Bobrow-Strain begins each chapter exploring the dream and the intentions that this dream set out to have which ultimately lead to bigger unintended consequences. This allows for him to demonstrate how food is always more than fuel for our bodies, it creates socioeconomic and emotional impacts. Bobrow-Strain sets out to make the reader realize that the dream surrounding “ good food” no longer focuses on the food we eat but rather the changes that need to be made within the food system, however his work leaves the reader with many unanswered questions on the measures that need to take place in order to make transformation
This confidence coalesced with Long’s adoption of such an appropriate, restrained, and fair-minded language in which audience members can individually interpret on comparable bases illustrates Long’s attempt to establish a connection to his
The third article, “Ending world hunger by stopping food waste in the fields” By Bjorn Lomborg tell the reader about how one quarter of all
Literature Review: Theoretical Approaches, Empirical Studies, Analytical Concepts and Legal Frameworks Theoretical Approaches towards food security With respect to the theoretical approaches to food security, there are three theories developed in 1970s and 1980s as cause to food insecurity. The first one is Climate theory; this theory explains food insecurity as caused by climatic phenomena. Cox, related this theory with the concept of “famine belt” in which he directly links climate condition to food insecurity. This theory argued that in the national or local level, climate linked phenomena such as drought, floods and others are a major factor causing food insecurity (Cox, 1981, cited in Steven Engler,
Situation Analysis The audience for this essay will be Professor Carrie Sample, instructor of my English 111 course, and my classmates in my Ivy Tech online course. The objective of my essay is to summarize, describe, and respond to one of multiple articles or videos that each student in my course read through. The articles/video my classmates and I read through pertained to food, but each article/video had their own differences and similarities. The topic of my essay revolves around Farmers’ markets and the fact that people shop at them thinking they are healthy for the environment, when in reality they are not.