In Libby Copeland’s,” Who was she? A DNA test only opened new mysteries,” Copeland tells the story of Alice Plebuch’s ancestry search, all while giving the reader information on DNA testing kits. Copeland constructed her paper to tell a story, inform the reader, and flow all in one. She used different types of descriptive vocabulary and commas to keep the reader hooked, then told the story of Plebuch through this writing. Copeland used commas throughout the whole paper in many different ways. The main use of commas I noticed was interrupting clauses. As she was presenting the information on Plebuch’s story, she would add interrupting clauses which really help present the information. Along with the commas she used descriptive vocabulary to further describe the story line and the news that Plebuch and her possible family members would receive. One of the many examples of this writing technique I came across was, “For Wiggins, the revelation confirmed a long, lingering sense that something was amiss with her father’s story.” In the sentence, there was an interrupting clause with descriptive adjectives and verbs to convey the feeling of the story at that point. The use of commas in the paper break up the flow a little bit and make it more interesting. I …show more content…
She used descriptive adjectives to relate the feeling of the story to the reader and added in verbs provide a sense of the work that went into the DNA search as a whole. Her use of strong vocabulary along with the well-constructed sentence structure allowed her to better convey her point or persuade the reader through the story to dig deeper into their own identity. She gave solid information in between the story in the paper and backed it all with evidence from the story. As she carefully worded the informational paragraphs they almost urge the reader to go and dig deeper into their own
Miracle on 49th street To start off I would give more detail into how her mom dies and what actually went on with her specifically through the book she talks about when her mom was sick and how her mom wrote letter but that 's so it leaves you kind of confused about why her mom wrote and what was happening to her mom that made her so sick. Then what gets me is she hides in the back of a famous basketball player’s car. Who does that? It’s creepy and just wrong to hide in someone 's car, just to talk to them.
Noah Augustine, former chief of Metepenagiag Mi'kmaq Nation, delivered a great essay on how culturally and morally ridiculous, it is to use Native symbols for sports team logos. He effectively talked about how offensive it really is to make ridicule of cultural symbols by using facts and real-life events. He is also helped by the use of analogy, diction and rhetorical questions to achieve this. Augustine, impressively used an analogy to persuade a wide range of readers as he makes a connection between other cultures and how they would feel if they were put in the same shoes as the Natives were in. He goes on to say, “Nonetheless, for me, as an Aboriginal person, the use of these religious symbols and caricatures of Indian chiefs or spiritual
Theresa Dodaro, author of Young Adult and Women’s Historical Fiction October 20, 1958, was not just any old day in Baldwin, NY. It was the day, Theresa Dodaro was born and the city became the place where she published her first novel. History and the “Once upon a time” story that it tells has significant interest for the author of the Tin Box Secret trilogy who spends time researching her family’s history as far back as the 1600s. Not only does she enjoy discovering her family’s heritage, she’s also traced her husband’s family lineage and has helped others discover their family roots.
The story begins with the narrator arriving at a small house in Jacksonville, Alabama to visit his father. As he greets his father he recalls past memories of when his father was healthy and can’t believe that he is now so old and frail. It is around this time that he states how even though he knows it’s the last time he’ll ever see his father he is unable to meet him in the eyes. The father, then, goes on to question as to why none of his other sons are there to see him in his last moments and the narrator hints to the reason being the neglect the father showed his sons and wife when they lived together. The son, however, does not tell him this because he realizes the toll life has taken on his father.
Have you ever wonder how does a crime scene investigator, known as a CSI, discover blood spatter on different fabrics, which is not visible to the human eye? The key is bluestar. According to the article “Influence of Bluestar Reagent on Blood Spatter Stain of Different Fabrics” by Arnon Grafit, bluestar is a “luminol-based reagent that is applied by spraying on surface.” Not only that, but “it helps obtain DNA and to analyze spatters patterns. By analyzing the article the reader is able to understand how bluestar works through the rhetorical techniques used.
passion. C. Wallace provides a depiction of how people view everyday situations from a pessimistic perspective: D. “But most days, if you're aware enough to give yourself a choice, you can choose to look differently at this fat, dead-eyed, over-made-up lady who just screamed at her kid in the checkout line. Maybe she's not usually like this” (Wallace 20). E. Wallace’s description of the lady sounds plausible to the audience because one may have constructed similar thoughts about total strangers. By beginning his argument with the description of the lady, Wallace allows the audience to be emotionally connected to the situation, therefore, his argument becomes more applicable.
In the book, The Girl with the Brown Crayon by teacher Vivian Gussin Paley is based on her curriculum for her classroom activity that was an influence by the author Leo Lionni’s books. Her book shows us the discoveries with her students and about her own personal innovation toward her student and herself. Through this unit she based her activity on several of Leo Lionni’s book the class explores the themes of diversity and identity between themselves and others. This book approached issues with child-sensitive behavior issues and with the aspect of dual language learning also. When reading about the author different description on each child and what she ultimately discovers for herself their different traits and characteristic the importance
Critical Review of Intuition Science is a complex and integrated system and much of today’s society lacks the means and resources to understand it. However, many of the greatest discoveries and issues of the 21st century our happening in the world of science. By using the work of fiction, Allegra Goodman discusses the issues that frequently arise in the world of science in her book, Intuition. Goodman uses this work of fiction to explore issues raised in the world of science through the use of descriptive text, character relations and the use of emotions. This adds value to science issues as it allows the reader to relate to the characters, story and science in a unique perspective.
Rhetorical Analysis of “The Jian Ghomeshi Effect: I Plan to Speak Now” In the article “The Jian Ghomeshi Effect: I Plan to Speak Now,” Camilla Gibb writes about the recent Jian Ghomeshi case and how important it is to realize that bystanders of sexual harassment can change the outcome for a victim by intervening and speaking out. Gibb persuades readers to stop the silence and address the harassment head on through her use of personal experiences, conversational language, and imagery. The article begins with Gibb introducing the reader to Ghomeshi by sharing her own personal experiences of both being harassed and of not speaking on behalf of others, she also adds stories of other women. Her personal experiences take up most
She cites scholarly articles and credible sources to establish her knowledge in the subject before writing a novel about Henrietta’s life, as well as to show the readers the credibility of her sources. This particular act conveys to the reader that Skloot wanted to be concise and precise while informing the audience about Henrietta’s
I see and understand your point. I also do not understand the idea of being purchased by strangers without our permission and even then it is still messed up to buy someone and take them to a place they do not know. But even though that was the case, Phillis actually acknowledged and preferred that she was moved to U.S where she can expand her education. I think Phillis Wheatley got a pretty good great deal that when John Wheatley and his wife purchased they took advantage of her knowledge and actually helped her expand that knowledge of writing such good poetry. I think Phillis Wheatley is a good woman even though I did not know her personally but by reading her story and bibliography I feel like she was women determined on learning and
Third person limited (only Ann’s emotion description) The points of view of the Painted Door and Two Fisherman are both third person limited, which only have one character’s emotional description, while other character only have physical description. The detailed description of Ann help the reader to understand the story and set the theme. The lack of the emotional description of John and Steven help the readers to have more interests on John and Steven, and therefore continue reading First person minor There are lots of descriptions of Dan’s father by the points of view of Dan.
In comparison to Bradstreet’s style was Phillis Wheatley, who wrote with a genuine spirit, straight forward simplicity, and was direct. Wheatley first found her fame with the poem “On the Death of the Rev. Mr. George Whitefield,” in 1770. Eulogies were very popular at the time and her work found attention in England as well as America. Examples of Wheatley’s sincerity can be found in all of her work, because she wrote from the heart and in a way that all men and women could connect to her work. Entertaining ideas for equality, with a strong straight forward argument, almost 100 years before wars would be fought to end slavery, and being respected as a person and not a slave is the strongest indication of Wheatley’s success.
Pullin’ Up Daisies is a well-written and interesting story that follows the protagonist, Sebastian, and his desire to sleep with Daisy, a girl he has killed. At the end of the story, it is revealed that Daisy and Sebastian share a surname. Initially, I suspected Daisy was a relative of Sebastian, like a sister or cousin, however, Daisy could also be Sebastian’s wife. Alternatively, the shared surname could be a coincidence. This story uses a variety of literary techniques and effectively uses dialogue, repetition, short sentences and focuses on action to construct realistic characters and events in an interesting and surprising story.
Allgood, Evan, and Fiona Maazel. “Contextual Loneliness: An Interview with Fiona Maazel.” Los Angeles Review of Books, lareviewofbooks.org/article/contextual-loneliness-an-interview-with-fiona-maazel/. This is a very valuable source because it includes an interview with Fionna Maazel and Evan Hoffman ( a director for literature at Stanford university). They discuss Maazel 's first novel, Last Last Chance, to which keys on an addict named Lucy Clark, trying to keep herself and her family from cracking up as a super plague. Another work discussed,Woke Up Lonely, also depicts a nation in crisis, this time in reaction to its citizens’ overwhelming loneliness.