Breaking the Five-Paragraph-Theme Barrier
“The five-paragraph essay theme is a national phenomenon,” wrote Thomas E. Nunnally, “Students from all over are proficient in the form” (3). He is right that students are constantly being taught that the five-paragraph essay is the proper format when it comes to writing an essay. The five-paragraph essay does have some usefulness as a guide and an organizational technique when formatting essays. However due to its lack of creativity and restricting nature, it is sometimes not the ideal choice when it comes to writing articles such as research and journal articles. In this essay, I will summarize the reading “Breaking the Five-Paragraph-Theme Barrier” by Thomas E. Nunnally and I will also talk about
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It contains the introduction paragraph, that must include a hook that grabs the attention of the readers, a thesis statement and a preview of the three arguments that you will be discussing in the body paragraphs, the three body paragraphs, containing the topic sentence that states the argument for each paragraph, the supporting points or examples and an explanation as to how this example supports your thesis statement, and the concluding paragraph which includes a restatement of the thesis, a summary of the main topic and arguments (1). The five-paragraph essay was designed for an experiment at an open junior college in Georgia, for inexperienced writers. At first the students who used this format of essay writing excelled on their SATs. But as the years went on, other students and institutions caught on to this format and began to use this it as well. This caused the inexperienced writers who were excelling to drop back down to their original position (2). Soon enough, the five-paragraph essay became the universal essay writing format, influencing many colleges and even high
“They’ll turn us into writing robots”, a student contends against the use templates influencing the structure of their essays. (10) In the book “They Say/ I Say”: The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing, Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein insist that the use of their relevant templates provide tools that will enhance the readers writing skills. These templates provide an exemplary format that one can use when writing an essay. Graff and Birkenstein suggests that, “Instead of focusing solely on abstract principles of writing, then, this book offers model templates that help you put those principles directly into practice.”
I need to assess your writing as individuals and the class as a group so I can make adjustments. Assignment Outline Paragraph 1 is a summary. A summary should identify author, article, purpose, and give me an idea of the main points. One of the most challenging aspects of summary is the length. This summary paragraph should be 5-7 sentences.
Body Paragraph 1- The theme that continuously reappears
STYLE 1. How important is the title of an essay? What should it do? How effective is this one, and why?
Followed by several counter arguments to why minority students have false gains when it comes to education. In his essay, Jonathan Kozol most important feature of style discourse would be length and style, because it showed that his paper had thought and quality. It gave specific evidence that helped him ultimately achieve his purpose of writing this essay. Without the length, it would have looked as though the speaker was not fully educated about his research however, Kozol could have narrowed down his argument instead of being all over the
Body Paragraph #1 Topic Statement
Thesis Statement (Main Argument/Preview of Points): Outlines your argument/theme. Law should usually be followed, but there are certain circumstances such as if you love someone, a law crosses your morals and if the law is unfair or unequal. BODY PARAGRAPH #1: This first paragraph should focus on how conflicts support theme. I. Topic Sentence: States the literary element and introduces how it supports your theme.
The Compound The theme of the Compound is cooperation. One time working together is important was when Eli and his family had to survive in the compound for 15 years thanks to the dad. Another evidence that working together is important is when Eli and the older sister tries to escape the compound. The last reason why working together is important is getting along with his sisters and brother. This is an example of how they have to work together because Eli used to only hang around his brother Eddie.
When Alexie realized what the purpose of a paragraph was, he felt delighted and experienced happiness. “I didn’t have the vocabulary to say “paragraph,” but I realized that a paragraph was a fence that held words… This knowledge delighted me” (Alexie 583). With learning the definition of the word “paragraph”, the author’s curiosity of reading increased. The author also began to see his family as paragraphs (Alexie 583).
Edleen Roberts Unteaching the Five paragraph Essay Into In the article “Unteaching the Five Paragraph Essay”, Marie Foley infer that the five paragraph essay format is blameworthy of high school graduate unpreparedness for college coursework. Foley stated that “Many college freshman enter composition course alienated from writing”(P.2) Foley also claim that “teaching the five paragraph formula harms the student in some fundamental ways….i'll-preparing them for academic and real world writing”(P.3) This paper is going to analyse Marie Foley point of view on the five paragraph
In " The 3 Effects of the Five Paragraph Theme" by Kimberly Wesley, she discusses the problems with using five paragraph theme (FPT). In this article, the writer argues that by using FPT will limit the students idea that can be represented in the paper. Students are trying fit the specific FPT requirements, and they cannot write any deeper or include new ideas. Student's tend to think not following the FPT will lead to bad grade. Therefore, students would not including more information, because it can be risk taking.
The piece of writing which I felt was unsuccessful for me was the Rhetorical Analysis of an article relating to a topic from our course book The New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness by Michelle Alexander. This piece of writing was difficult for me to organize my ideas around. The article that I decided to use for my rhetorical analysis highlighted mass incarceration among African American and the effect of civil liberties being are taken away from these individuals. I had a lot of repetition because many of the examples I used demonstrated more than one type of appeal. I found myself repeating what the purpose of the example was and how it demonstrated proper use of ethos, pathos, and logos.
I took the time to write out an outline for this essay to help manage the chaos that is my writing, unlike my other essays for the course. As I said before, I have learned to question the structure of my paragraphs. For example: when I was revising the Composing Process essay, I noticed that a set of paragraphs could be rearranged and partially rewritten to improve the structure and make the essay flow better. However, I would argue that my Justification video assignment demonstrates my assertion better than my revised essays. From the beginning, I laid out a clear path that my Justification video needed to follow.
The thesis should set up the paper and each paragraph should reflect back to the thesis. For example the author’s main idea was how there are positive and negatives to the use of guns and how the gun control in government doesn’t satisfy
Short stories are fast anecdotes, quickly delivering a message to a reader. Typically, they are one-thousand to twenty-thousand words long. There is a small emotional impact – especially compared to larger pieces of literature – but the theme is still conveyed. And there are countless themes when writing stories. Nonetheless, observing the many aspects of literature in short stories, there are always similarities within the differences.