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Unit 7 Thesis Statement

Satisfactory Essays
I referred to unit 7’s discussion post where you outlined your essay. So far your research has proven to make for an interesting essay. I’m sorry I did not find a persuasive thesis statement in Unit 8 though, meaning I’m not convinced that there should be a policy change. I know you stated this is a working thesis statement which was not included in unit 8’s post. If you don’t mind, I would like to give some guidance. I used unit 7 statement to provide an example for you. Thesis statement: Outdated policy has been the cause of mentally ill inmates being mishandled by improperly trained officers, that use harmful forms of isolation, and was the cause of medication errors. The mentally ill inmate most often returns to society worse off than
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