Counter argument First draft “When was your last time to log in Facebook? How did you feel then? And Why?”. All these questions were in the heads of many researchers and writers to know if social networking makes us happy or sad, is it useful or not. One of these writers is Justin Mullins, he argued this topic in his article “Can Facebook make you sad?” which was put out in the New York Times on February 6, 2014. Mullins throughout his article discussed that issue showing how Facebook or social network in general can affect us in many ways. He listed at first many benefits of internet and social networking which I agree with. He was right when he claimed that internet communication is an unimagined invention that helped people to communicate …show more content…
He was also convincing when he said that it connects families, friends and colleagues around the world and facilitate communication between them despite their different languages. I also agree with him that Facebook is not for entertainment but it also has a beneficial effect, we could read and know more about the world news, health, sports ….etc. through different Facebook pages. He was also correct when he defended those whom we see happier than us by telling that they may be more likely to share their success than failures. And last but not the least I totally agree with him that all Facebook users shouldn’t only use Facebook for their entertainment but to become active instead. He then depended on many researches (some of unknown sources) and a life story of some kid to claim that Facebook makes us sad and less satisfied than usual, and the less we used it the less we feel that way, here comes my points of disagreement with the author. Despite the fact that the author throughout the article compromises exciting and valid arguments concerning how can Facebook makes us sad, some of his arguments need to be inspected more closely as they are feeble and unsupported, full of false …show more content…
Still other fragile points have been spotted and refuted such as the false assumptions, weak evidences and logical fallacies stated before. As a whole it was a respectable article presenting the author’s explanations and sources behind his belief. Work Cited
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Social media has been long known to have effects on the sociability aspect of many people’s lives. Though, it’s often wondered how severely the use of these platforms can alter people’s minds and their outlook on life. In the article published in a popular publication for everyday users of the internet with an interest in psychology and social well being, Psychology Today, “Does Using Social Media Make You Lonely?” written by David Ludden who has a Ph.D. in cognitive psychology, the author addresses this issue by examining how one’s social life and loneliness can be adjusted depending on their use of social media. Ludden crafts a convincing argument that the effects of social media on an individual’s social well being depends on how they use
Facebook Friendonomics by Scott Brown Scott Brown, a writing critique, in his essay “Facebook Friendonomics” implies that social media, such as Facebook, has changed the definition of friendships. He refers how friendships online are distant and lacks the value of a physical friendship. His purpose is to show how Facebook makes friendships expandable and weakens real-life connections. He uses diction to negative connotation to convince his audience that online friends lack the personal growth compare to proper friendship. Brown’s argument effectively motivates people to put aside their devices, met face-to-face, and fulfill the values of a proper friendship.
It was found that “loneliness was a positive predictor of Facebook usage. … The loneliness variable controlled for the direct effect between the need for privacy and Facebook addiction was significant” (Błachnio et al.). Also on social media sites like Facebook, we get shortened versions of stories and the news possibly because of our shorter attention spans. We don’t want to listen to long stories with unnecessary details, instead we want the essential limited information immediately.
Readers can analyze Zimmerman’s effective claim in “Hooked on Facebook'' which is
Behind the Screen In the article, “The Fakebook Generation” by Alice Mathias, she states her point of view about Facebook. The author compares online users to performers and Facebook to a theatre and an entertaining show. The author calls her generation the “Fakebook Generation”, because most of the people of her generation sugarcoat their lives to their advantage by posting the best moments of their lives or filling their timeline with humor. Also one of Mathias statements were, “Dwelling online is a cowardly and utterly enjoyable alternative to real interaction” (3).
He talks about how social media is tied around weak ties, and how Twitter and Facebook is a good way to have many friends or stay in touch with people you usually wouldn’t. But he says that if can be a wonderful thing. “There is strength in weak ties, as the sociologist Mark Granovetter has observed. Our acquaintances--not our friends-- are our greatest source of new ideas and information” (407). Here he is trying to show the good in having loads of internet friends, but explain of that can be a bad thing.
While I do agree with Carr, his paper is rather outdated. Even after being published in 2008 most of the popular social media sites used today had not been launched yet or were not nearly as popular. For instance, Facebook, which had been launched in 2004, had only 220 million users in 2008 compared to the 2.2 billion active users it has today (Schonfeld). With the hundreds of different social media sites and apps people are constantly wasting their time as well as shortening their attention spans. Everywhere you look people are constantly distracted by their phones by the constant need to be connected online.
In her document “ The Fakebook Generation,” later to be published in the New York Times on October 6, 2007, Alice Mathias enters the topic of the most used social networking service worldwide, Facebook. Mathias debates on Facebook’s claim of being a forum for “genuine personal and professional connections” and tries to influence her readers to ask themselves if the website really promotes human relationships. The author illustrates in her document the power and impact Facebook had on the population by convincing to be “a place of human connectivity,” but states her idea of Facebook missing its real reason of enriching human connectivity. Mathias goes on how Facebook became more as an “online community theater” than a functional service tool. She provided examples like people who announce relationships with Chinese food in their status in order to make others laugh instead of providing useful updates.
The Use of Social Networking Nowadays, we are living under decent technology and it has changed a lot of things: Entertainment, communication, and relationship; economy, education, and habit; medical, political and cultural etc. Social media has allowed us to interact with many more people other than we are used to before. We are living in a world where people would rather use text message with their mobile phone than face-to-face to each other, share greeting with more than hundreds of friends on the social media such as upload how they feel on Facebook, show photo Instagram, and what they are doing with Snapchat.
Information and communication technology has seen lot of changes and advancements since the year 2000, key among them being the development of social media as a social influencer. It has become prominent parts of life for many young people today. We are all aware that social media has had a tremendous impact on our culture, in business, on the world-at-large and social media websites are some of the most popular haunts on the internet. Most people engage with social media without stopping to think what the effects are on our lives, whether positive or negative. Are we as society becoming more concerned with Facebook “friends” than we are with the people we interact with face-to-face in our daily lives?
Some people say that social media is dangerous for kids because it changes their behaviors and more importantly it affects their learning for school. It is dangerous because, they never know who they are chatting with online. Social media changes children 's behaviors because they do unhealthy things that are intended for people over 18 years of age. It also affects their education in a bad way by using abbreviations or slang that threatens their skills in writing. However, others say that social media is beneficial for kids because researchers see them expressing themselves on it.
As the technology era change over time, the social media becomes an important part of our life. We use social media to connect with friends and family, also to found out the latest news or fashion trends. Especially after the great success of Facebook, many other social media follow along such as Snapchat and Instagram. Numerous young age children gradually sink into the virtual world of Social Media. According to the Pew Research Center survey, that majority of Americans use Facebook and YouTube, but young adults are especially heavy users of Snapchat and Instagram.
Social media sites including Snapchat, Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram are at their peak when influencing young adults. Ongoing issues, cyberbullying, threats, and hate crimes are being presented through these social media sites and this is one of the multitude of reasons why parents should limit the use of technology for their teenagers. I agree that parents should limit the use of social media for their teenage child, or for any age child, because ongoing use causes lack of exercise, impaired social skills, and harm for threat and violence. Parents should restrict the use of social media sites for their children because it causes a decrease in physical activity. New research is showing a rapid decline in physical activity all around the globe.
There are still points that require being fixed, but the positive effects outweigh the negative ones. Social media is a very precious tool that can be used to meet new personalities, and allow people to be in touch with friends and families; it positively affects the world by empowering people to educate and work online and gives space for
and Facebook allow us to also share our lives indirectly with photos and statuses sharing the recent memories we create and also serves as a place