I have never been a good storyteller, instead of explaining what happened from start to finish I go on tangents, turning imaginary corners, leading the listener far from my original goal. I focus on the flower that I saw laying on the dresser instead of the man sitting beside it. A truly good short story is nothing like me.
A short story is like a snowglobe, trapping a whole world behind glass pages, each snowflake placed there for a reason, each shake showing a different perspective of that same scene.
Anyone can write a story. Putting a few words on the page, telling a series of events, it's not hard. Writing a good story on the other hand is something that very few authors have been able to perfect. Every story has its own way of portraying
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Whether it be through a specific motif, general idea or phrase. In The Things They Carried by Tim O’Brien, each character had a specific item that they are listed as carrying with them while they “hump”. After O’brien gives an extensive backstory detailing who First Lieutenant Jimmy Cross's letter first came from, he describes it as only being “10 ounces”, an oddly specific number for something so seemingly insignificant. He goes on to list off the impersonal objects they all must carry, “steel helmets that weighed 5 pounds” and “jungle boots—2.1 pounds”. These weights represent not only the physical weights they undertook by fighting in a war, but also the mental and emotional weights they had to carry with them. Each of them undergoes the same overall burden while the Lieutenant has to deal with the extra ten ounces of heartbreak, or Ted Lavender with his “6 or 7 ounces of premium dope”. This revelation couldn't have come about without the specific motif, the weight they carried. Although seemingly meaningless, this motif adds another layer to the story. All the numbers listed afterwards begin to disorient the reader, and although they could be read as simply trying to add descriptions to the story, there is something deeper behind
Tim O’Brien’s The Things They Carried explores the experiences of soldiers in the Vietnam War, along with their thoughts and memories. Though the events that take place could be exaggerated or completely made up, the thoughts and feelings of the characters still shine through and feel very real. The stories use a grim and uncontrollable atmosphere juxtaposed with the normality of human action that works to suggest war is above common morality yet defends the humanity of the soldiers who fight it. O'Brien begins his novel by listing the various items soldiers would carry to emphasize the literal weight on their shoulders, helping the reader see the humanity in these fighters. He uses the numerical poundage, which gives an understanding of how
O’Brien lists the items the soldiers are carrying, such as "matches, C-rations, malaria tablets, and two or three grenades. " These descriptions create a sense of realism and specificity, as well as emphasize the weight and burden of the soldiers' physical possessions. The soldiers are described as carrying their emotions with them at all times, even when they are not actively participating in the conflict. Yet, the emphasis on these tangible goods also helps to underline the weight of the soldiers' emotional baggage, which is intangible but no less substantial. For example, the line "They were afraid of dying
This weight has a way of finding its way in and forcing its way into my dreams, almost as if it's determined to further burden me as I lay my head down to sleep. Never a moment away, never a moment to escape from myself nor from my families placed expectations. Though I am burdened with this seemingly infinite and endlessly heavy load, in these nightmares I can still look toward the future for hope. In the short story “The Things They Carried,” author, Tim O’Brien unforgettably describes through the character Lieutenant Cross and his fellow soldiers that the weight of the intangible things we carry outweigh and burden us more than the weight of the physical things we
Evidence. The entirety of the short story “The Things They Carried” takes place during the Vietnam war. One can make the assumption, even without any knowledge of the Vietnam war, that soldiers fighting in the war carried both physical and emotional burdens. Being a soldier in a war comes with inescapable physical burdens such as carrying weapons and other necessary supplies. One can also assume that being a soldier fighting in war may also come with feelings of loss and guilt.
For example, O’Brien describes the physical weight of the items soldiers carry, such as guns, ammunition, and grenades. However, he also describes the emotional weight of the war, writing, “They carried all the emotional baggage of men who might die. Grief, terror, love, longing – these were intangible yet had their own mass and specific gravity” (O’Brien 21). This quote illustrates how the soldiers, not only carry physical objects, but also the emotional weight of their experiences in the war. Furthermore, this story depicts “the weight of burdens that press on soldiers in the field and how they handle those burdens” (Farrell).
The Weight In the short story, “The Things They Carried”, Tim O’Brien talks about the weight soldiers carry in war. This particular war that Tim O’Brien was a part of is the Vietnam war. The soldiers in Vietnam have not only their gear to carry but they also carry the weight of the world in their hearts. Tim O’Brien uses symbolism, figurative language, and imagery to tell us of none other than pure hell.
For example, the narrator repeatedly describes the weight of weight during the soldiers arduous journey: “Among the necessities or near necessities were R-38 can openers, pocket knives, heat tabs, wristwatches, dog tags, mosquito repellants, chewing gum, candy, cigarettes, salt tablets...2-3 canteens of water. Together these items weighted between 15-20 pounds” (O'Brien 470). Subsequently, the narrator and his companions embark on a perilous journey all while facing
Story is an integral element in human life. Stories are the way humans have shared and learned for thousands of years. Storytelling is different from story writing. When a story is told, the original content lingers as long as the storytellers maintain that content. Once the story is retold it takes on different details and meaning.
The things these men carried were solid with weight and are able to be transported from one place to another by physically moving the object. However, the reader soon discovers it also refers to an emotional weight. As Kaplan states, “Obrien introduces the reader to some of the things, imaginary and concrete, emotional and physical, that the average soldier had to carry through the jungles of Vietnam” (2/8). In the Army there is a saying, “Go to war, or go to jail”. During the time of the Vietnam War, a majority of the men were drafted.
O’brien writes about the things these soldiers carried from intangible items/memories to tangible items or people. They carried all the emotional baggage of men who might die. Grief, terror, love, longing - these were intangible, but the intangible haf their own mass and specific gravity, they had tangible weight. They carried shameful memories.
A burden, by definition, is a heavy load that is often difficult to carry. War, both for a country and an individual, is one of the headiest burdens to be shouldered with. War forces change in men both physically, emotionally, and mentally. In the short story “The Things They Carried” by Tim O’Brien the tough weight the infantrymen must carry is both physical and emotional.
They carry themselves with poise, while hiding shame, with "wistful resignation," "pride," "stiff soldierly discipline," "good humor," and "macho zeal. " They are all afraid to die but try not to show it. How is the idea of “weight” used and developed in the story? Explain O’Brien’s use of both the literal and figurative definitions of “weight.” Use textual evidence to support your analysis.
The author was writing the story “The Things They Carried” expressed so many thoughts and feelings about what the soldiers had faced, they showed their feelings and duties, life or death, and overall fear and dedication. This story shows the theme of the physical and emotional burdens that everyone is going through in the war. By showing his readers what the soldier’s daily thoughts are and how they handle what is going on around them. Tim O’Brien expresses this theme by using characterization, symbolism, and tone continuously. In the story, physical and emotional burdens plagued several characters as they all had baggage weighing them down.
People have beliefs that short stories are narrated by people who are reliable. However, unreliable narrators are people who are telling the story in their own way. The three stories, The Yellow Wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins Gilman, The Tell-Tale Heart by Edgar Allan Poe, and Strawberry Spring by Stephen King.
Reading and writing was one of my favorite activities to do as a kid, and it still is. Ever since I learned to read, I began to write short stories. Oh, how rude of me! I forgot to introduce myself. Hello Mr.Rase, my name’s Elena Serafimovski and I’m a writer in my junior year of high school.