Felt Difficulties
1) I have read that whenever Tom writes a story, he immerses his bare feet in the bowl full of chick blood under his desk. Is it true?
2) Who is the biker in the sentence, “I said nothing about the biker” (page 535).
Response to “Greasy Lake” by T. Coraghessan Boyle T. Coraghessan Boyle is a famous American novelist. His writing usually focuses on the usual issues of society. He reflects the nature of human and the conflicts in the society in his satirical stories. Thus, most of his stories are easy to relate by people of different kinds. The story, “Greasy Lake,” is from his collection of “Greasy Lake and Other Stories (1985).” The story depicts the emotional conflicts of three adolescent boys, and expresses the situation
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It is very much similar to their friend, Tony’s car. As they wanted to make fun by startling Tony, they run quickly into that car. Unfortunately, it isn’t Tony’s car as they thought. It is the car of a guy or a greasy character guy who is hanging out with his girlfriend. Since the guy and his girlfriend is making love in the car, he gets angry by the manner of the boys. So, he kicks the narrator at his face, and chips the narrator’s favorite teeth. Tom wrote this action in a witty way, “… kick of his steel-toed boot caught me under the chin, chipped my favorite tooth…” (Page 531). Here, I catch the author’s cleverness of entertaining the reader. It is if he only used the words “my tooth”, readers will not get much humorous as using the words “my favorite tooth.” So, the narrator gets really angry because his favorite tooth is chipped. It is not a regular tooth. It is his “favorite” tooth. Thus, the narrator and his friends fight seriously with the guy. When they are fighting, the narrator takes the tire iron and hit right at the guy’s head. Again, the author shows us how bravery the narrator is by revealing the only fight he had encountered when he was sixth grade. Even he was defeated by a kid with a sleep eye and two streams of mucus depending from his nostrils. This detailed picture of the kid who won over the narrator is particularly …show more content…
Then, they see the girl who is only with panties and the shirt, and she runs into them and fights them. As the rebellious spirit is at high, they grab the girl’s clothing and attempt to rape her. Meanwhile, a car is approaching the lake, and they run into the muddy forest since their car key is missing. The girl cries to the men of the second car. I used men because the author wrote, “there were male voices…” (Page 533) . So, the three boys are hiding in the forest. They scare of the incest, snake and frog. The narrator is thinking sadly that the guy he hit is died. Suddenly, he loses his desire of being a bad boy. The narrator is picturing going to a funeral of the dead guy, and he is also going to jail. All of the sudden, the narrator feels creep in his spine, because the guy he thought already dead is moving. The narrator gets frighten and also happy since the guy is alive. The author described the narrator’s feeling as, “Just as quickly, my bowels turned to ice” (Page 533). It is really hilarious. When someone gets extremely excitement, he or she will have the feeling of loosing bowels. It usually happens to us when the exam period is closer. But in here, the narrator not even gets the feeling of loosing bowels, he feels as if his bowels turned to
Nature has a unique way of portraying the truth. This short story by Guadalupe Nettel is able to connect how the narrator’s marriage reflects the life of the Betta fish. Despite all of this, there are many marriages like the narrator’s and her husband, Vincent, that go through challenges that are soon discovered to be fault of a failing marriage and how animals can portray the lives of their owners. However, The narrator soon learns through observing her fish that her marriage is dysfunctional and isn't working the way she hoped for. Therefore, my lens revolves around nature portraying reality.
Lyman attempts to work on the worn car while his brother is gone. Fixing the car reminds Lyman of the happy times he had with his brother and provides as a coping mechanism while Henry is away. Henry, like many soldiers returning home from war finds himself suffering with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. Henry is disturbed by gory images of people dying and suffering from battle wounds. Henry is withdrawn from his relationship with his brother and his mother.
They see one of their friend’s car in the lake. They try to embarrass their friend because he is there with his girlfriend. The boys wanted to be bad with his friend because they are dangerous. Finally when they realize that it is not their friend Tony’s car it was too late for them. A man come out from the car and beginning fight with them.
The setting of the story reveals a lot about the characters. The narrator uses the setting of the story to mirror the state of morality and corruption of the youth. The narrator also uses the setting to create an atmosphere that is appropriate for developing the character of the individuals within the story. In essence the narrator uses Greasy Lake as both a setting and character. The description that is given of Greasy Lake is very disturbing to most who read it.
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In the story E.B. Whites “Once more to the lake”, a story based on a father and a son who go on a camping trip, where White becomes captivated with and stuck in his own childhood. It shows that time passes and people grow of age. When white takes his son to the lake he realizes that even though the lake has barely changed, that time has changed. He has a sense of his son replacing him as he is replacing his dad. It was important to White to take his own son back to the same place because he finally comes to the realization that time doesn’t stop for anyone and that you have to move forward and one day grow old.
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“Sometimes resilience arrives in the moment you discover your own unshakeable goodness” (87). When you discover the good you have in yourself, you will have be able to change and can recover from any difficulties. Why is resilience essential in our lives? Without resilience, we would be lost every time something bad or traumatic happened to us. With resilience, we are able to adapt and accept the disfunction and still function.
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Have you ever dived head first into a piece of writing that has you swimming laps across the pool because of all the great things the writer fills the piece with? Brian Doyle is such a writer that could do just that. He is mesmerizingly alluring throughout his writing to say the least. Most all of Doyle’s pieces seem to reflect his appreciation of language; words, phrases, sentences, how things sound and more. The essay entitled “The Meteorites”, by Brian Doyle, is really well written due to the fact of his well thought out diction, which flows throughout the essay while having imagery intimidatingly piggy back along.
In the short story Greasy Lake, the author T. Coraghessan Boyle styles his writing like a careless young adult and it assists in the set up of the story. Greasy Lake is written in first person point of view leading the main character to tell his rendition of the events that occurred including his own opinions. The way that Boyle swears and writes in an almost lazy manner at the beginning of the story makes the perspective of the storyline believable. “We were nineteen. We were bad.