My Fences: Personal Narrative Analysis

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After reading through my Fences essay, I am happy with how the essay turned out but in the future their are areas I think I can improve on. I felt as though my thesis was strong and demonstrated my argument in the essay. Although, in the future I think I can strength my essay by adding more analysis and evidence. By adding more evidence from the text in my essay, I would be more able to go deeper in analysis and better explain my argument. Along with using more examples from the text, using more outside evidence that exemplifies the say idea would strength my essay and make me a stronger writer. A writing goal I have besides having stronger analysis is to improve my vocabulary and word choice in the essay. Overall I was happy with my

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